Oh yes

[Heartcore]

And I'll take what is given to me
And I'll realize I'm not going home
And after a while, when all of your currency's gone
And after a while
When all your mistakes have been made
And you've tasted the carbon dioxide

[Andy]

It's a bit long.

[Vanity__Dearest]

yeah, you really need to chop that one down...it was really quite a bother reading for so long...it's a good start, i've been writing for awhile tho, and i could never see writing anything that short, and stopping there lol

[jaimej]

Hmmmmmmmm, so you're in Bear vs. Shark? Or you just write for them...... :headshake

[Vanity__Dearest]

hahah...i don't really like bear vs shark. sounds like one of their songs tho, you are right.

[jaimej]

hahah...i don't really like bear vs shark. sounds like one of their songs tho, you are right.Yep. Lame.

[Heartcore]

yes, thank god
bear vs. shark owns and i was hoping someone would actually get this and this forum wasn't just for people to bash on whatever is written.

[apoemtothedead]

That's funny. Bear vs. Shark writes a lot like Thursday and Blink 182. I like them though.

[IAmCountryMusic]

bear vs who?

[jaimej]

Whatever asshole called me a "stupid fuck" for replying in this thread, it was a joke, dick.