Agnostalgia

[TyroneShoolaces]

in the wake of minds shattered by safety
in the shadow of hearts that never were
redefine your realities
rewrite all the rules
the truth is subjective after all

this isn't the path you chose
yet you walk it everyday
how could you consent to such rape?

with each pretentious attempt made in vain
i leave you jaded and in pain
i am your savior now

steeples built upon fiction
crumble beneath my weight
don't close your eyes

damning the deity
and burning the bible
saving the world one page at a time

[apoemtothedead]

saving the world one page at a time

How to:
1) Stop Writing.
2) Well, that's about it.

[TyroneShoolaces]

How to:
1) Stop Writing.
2) Well, that's about it.

Lemme guess . . . you love Jesus?

[apoemtothedead]

Lemme guess . . . you love Jesus?
No. I'm Jewish. And that was still the one of the shitiest pieces of writing I've seen.

[IAmCountryMusic]

being clever is overrated

[xforestxwaitsx]

being clever is overrated

You would know wouldn't you, since you've always been so clever. Oh, I'm sorry(not). I must have mistaken you for someone worthy of being read.

I actually like the poem. Only question: Are you trying to ryhme or not? You kind of seem to have a rhyme scheme one second but then the next you don't.

No. I'm Jewish. And that was still the one of the shitiest pieces of writing I've seen.

Ahh..at last...we know why he's such an angry person, he's Jewish. I tell you what, you make fun of my dead cousin, and I'll make fun of you're dead race.

[ArTkY_]

It was ok... last stanza can blow me.

[xforestxwaitsx]

nothing good to read anymore. i'm bored. i need someone to insult me again.

[ArTkY_]

nothing good to read anymore. i'm bored. i need someone to insult me again.
blow me

[xforestxwaitsx]

sounds fun to me

[ArTkY_]

sounds fun to me
:sex:

[xforestxwaitsx]

yes, please!!!!

[ArTkY_]

yes, please!!!!
dirty girl. I'm too classy for you :toff:

[xforestxwaitsx]

dirty? come be dirty with me!?!?

[ArTkY_]

dirty? come be dirty with me!?!?
fine then I will :fuck:

[xforestxwaitsx]

yea!!!!!i like it that way

[apoemtothedead]

Ahh..at last...we know why he's such an angry person, he's Jewish. I tell you what, you make fun of my dead cousin, and I'll make fun of you're dead race.

Judaism isn't a race. Thanks for your ignorance.

[takingback98]

back to the idea of the poem it was decent but you can deff minus that last stanza

[xforestxwaitsx]

Judaism isn't a race. Thanks for your ignorance.

On the contrary, the Jews/Isrealites, to my knowledge, have been considered one of the oldest groups of people by scientists for quite some time now. Thank you for your lack of historical knowledge. :)

[apoemtothedead]

On the contrary, the Jews/Isrealites, to my knowledge, have been considered one of the oldest groups of people by scientists for quite some time now. Thank you for your lack of historical knowledge. :)
Race does not equal religion. Dumbshit.

[xforestxwaitsx]

Race does not equal religion. Dumbshit.

In this case it does. Considering that the traditional beliefs of the isrealites= judaism, one could assume that you were of isreali decent, unless you follow karbala or something. more than likely, in most cases, that is the truth.

[apoemtothedead]

In this case it does. Considering that the traditional beliefs of the isrealites= judaism, one could assume that you were of isreali decent, unless you follow karbala or something. more than likely, in most cases, that is the truth.
Race= European, African, Hispanic, etc.
Religion= Christianity, Judaism, Islam etc.

[IAmCountryMusic]

Race does not equal religion. Dumbshit.
:(

[apoemtothedead]

:(
Not you. Were you the one that gave her posi?

[IAmCountryMusic]

Not you. Were you the one that gave her posi?
i dont know what that means

You would know wouldn't you, since you've always been so clever. Oh, I'm sorry(not). I must have mistaken you for someone worthy of being read.
:( but... :(

[apoemtothedead]

i dont know what that means


:( but... :(
positive points.

[IAmCountryMusic]

positive points.
not me:D

she apparantly just owned me

[apoemtothedead]

not me:D

she apparantly just owned me
then take them away cuz she's a bitch.

[merv the perv]

DJ is my homeboy.

[IAmCountryMusic]

then take them away cuz she's a bitch.
mark, this isnt my argument

DJ is my homeboy.
make me a real man :love: :fuck:

[apoemtothedead]

mark, this isnt my argument

Well then, take them away because she tried to take them from me. Even though she had no power at the time. Dumb girls.

[ArTkY_]

make me a real man :love: :fuck:
It's been done. By me of course.

[IAmCountryMusic]

It's been done. By me of course.
here is a reenactment :flag::dance:

[ArTkY_]

here is a reenactment :flag::dance:
ROFL