new short one.

[Alex Djaferis]

not sure what i think about it. its hard to read, melodies in my head :D


come clean coma

settle my thoughts in mind
to open my eyes for the last time;
comatose reality
i understand my individuality
scened by the social class
of the obscene
its time to come clean

face the world and say
"this voice is here to stay...
and i say!

come clean coma
you've done enough to me
these scars will marr
the eyes that never saw
through the lies and deciet
leave me in peace

our eyes are being stripped
from our faces
yet we stay content
but blind
so blind

[ArTkY_]

rewrite it, NOW

[xforestxwaitsx]

rewrite it, NOW

:headshake
what he said

[kimosabe]

rewrite it, NOW
rewrite it by using the 'delete' button and taking large doses of sleeping pills. That kind of rewrite. the one your parents wish they had an opportunity to do with you .

[apoemtothedead]

Not short enough.

[takingback98]

unique...thats always good