Natural Selection

[mercutio7]

Whats up everyone? Haven't been on here in fucking forever. Anyways, my band Hammer Hands just finished our first full-length, and this song will be on it.

“Natural Selection”

Let’s pick apart the heart of the sea and find out why it’s mean.

Why it stirs and sinks and rips and reaps.
Why it doesn’t tense up and forget why it’s free.
And the force with which it wraps around my wrists
and spins me towards the bottom of that smiling abyss-
well I got this crazy, sinking feeling that it’s the only thing I’ll ever know that’s real.

It’s why I drive with drugs at night
And fight and fuck and flee and don’t pray.
But I miss like no one else has ever been alive.

I should have been put down.
I should have been put down.
I should’ve, I should, I should have.

We were plotting getting lost in her dark apartment,
and with her jammed cluttered heart heart like a glove compartment,
she buried her head just to know what was under it.

It’s why I drive with drugs at night
And fight and fuck and flee and don’t pray.
But I miss like no one else has ever been alive.

I am a salesman; and I sold you.
I am an animal, and I told you.
Sleep with the fishes, my love.
And sleep well.

[de la sympathie]

Haven't seen you around here in a very long time. Welcome back.

Seems to me like this is cliched, but you write it well, and I actually enjoyed it quite a bit. It's off from what many post here.