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when 4ever ends
05/23/05, 03:21 PM
It’s getting close to departure and your getting closer to entering my heart
I’m so sorry for those great smiles that you’ve given me
Because if it weren’t for them, I wouldn’t be writing a song
About how you let me go
Look what you’ve done

The walks under the beautiful sky
The walks you and I shared
But I just couldn’t spit it out..
I just couldn’t let you know
How much I cared
How much I loved you


You’re getting closer to entering and im getting closer to departure
And I can’t stand your clever lines and catch phrases
The catchy lines with the hook that leaves you waiting for an answer
The answer that neither of us have
Do we go for it, do you want to stay a while?

Those walks under the moonlit night
That night that you said lets dance, but our hesitation lead us to reality and we woke up from our dream
The moonlit night that now resembles a storm
We were so in love
We could of wrote a book, with a beginning and end yet the greatest plot.

All those things you said to me
All those smiles you threw at me
All those looks you gave to me
All what I thought was true, now I know who you really are

Im the boat and you’re the anchor baby, and your going down with the ship
Look what you did
Say good bye to innocence. Give it one last glance


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its the first time ive written something.. but its probally really bad. so dont rip me apart

apoemtothedead
05/23/05, 04:29 PM
its the first time ive written something

please make it the last.

soreloser
05/23/05, 06:03 PM
It's decent.

McDonald's represent.

when 4ever ends
05/24/05, 09:50 PM
heck yes mcdonalds pwns

xforestxwaitsx
05/25/05, 03:48 PM
heck yes mcdonalds pwns

i love your sig!!!! the lyrics are good, still need some work. keep writing. it's nice to see good lyrics on here

GREENatarisDAY
05/27/05, 09:09 AM
lyrics arent good but dont stop writing, you''ll get better in a few months.

Riverwings
05/31/05, 12:10 AM
please make it the last.

hahahaha!! :animateds -- I managed to read the first line

ForeversLastDay
05/31/05, 12:08 PM
lyrics arent good but dont stop writing, you''ll get better in a few months.


He's right. Go read some of his...

R7265ab
05/31/05, 01:32 PM
lyrics arent good but dont stop writing, you''ll get better in a few months.
Shut up you suck

GREENatarisDAY
06/02/05, 04:36 PM
Shut up you suck

its not my fault you're ugly man

xxgodimuglyxx
06/15/05, 08:56 AM
It’s getting close to departure and your getting closer to entering my heart
I’m so sorry for those great smiles that you’ve given me
Because if it weren’t for them, I wouldn’t be writing a song
About how you let me go
Look what you’ve done

The walks under the beautiful sky
The walks you and I shared
But I just couldn’t spit it out..
I just couldn’t let you know
How much I cared
How much I loved you


You’re getting closer to entering and im getting closer to departure
And I can’t stand your clever lines and catch phrases
The catchy lines with the hook that leaves you waiting for an answer
The answer that neither of us have
Do we go for it, do you want to stay a while?

Those walks under the moonlit night
That night that you said lets dance, but our hesitation lead us to reality and we woke up from our dream
The moonlit night that now resembles a storm
We were so in love
We could of wrote a book, with a beginning and end yet the greatest plot.

All those things you said to me
All those smiles you threw at me
All those looks you gave to me
All what I thought was true, now I know who you really are

Im the boat and you’re the anchor baby, and your going down with the ship
Look what you did
Say good bye to innocence. Give it one last glance


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its the first time ive written something.. but its probally really bad. so dont rip me apart
hey, that isnt bad expecially for ur first time writing something i liked it. just keep writing and forget all the ppl who say its bad, cuase there wrong.