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takingback98
05/24/05, 01:34 PM
this one is old, i just found it in my room:

this blue notebook with a radio on the front holds all of my secrets
lines scriblled down and collective drawings, and line after line and ryhme after ryhme
all of them written on bus rides and bad times
and somewhere in each little sonnet, your name finds away to make an appearence on it
but this one here that im scratching on paper, is the last one about you, goodbye breathetaker

xforestxwaitsx
05/24/05, 03:36 PM
Wow, that's really good

ArTkY_
05/24/05, 03:45 PM
this poem > your other one

SicTrnsitGloria
05/24/05, 08:32 PM
this poem > your other one
agreed.