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EnderDove
05/24/05, 06:17 PM
- Right On The Left Side -

a shattered rib sounds off your last gasp / where will you turn / a cavity is shaping the void in my remorse / not even a double edge sword will free you of your bonds / the final splinter in your mind is the last nail in my coffin / where will you turn when the scapegoat has been slaughtered


- III -


redecorate these drapes with the nightly arguments / words that hang around the blades of the fan / love was left outside on this night / left to be found by an embrace / litigation builds more than it will break down / as the cold sweat becomes a fever the mood will settle / the smoke will then clear from the barrel to glorify a crimson disasterpiece

apoemtothedead
05/24/05, 06:19 PM
- III -

Read between the lines. (Note: Replace 'I's with fingers.

SicTrnsitGloria
05/24/05, 07:37 PM
Read between the lines. (Note: Replace 'I's with fingers.
hahaha

xforestxwaitsx
05/25/05, 02:23 PM
I like them. The first one could use a bit of tweaking but the second one is awesome.