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Eva
05/28/05, 03:15 PM
Do you remember, many years ago when we were young.
How we used to play together everyday?

It seems like just yesterday the young world of candy, toys and
summer days.

That never seemed to end
When we played hide n' seek
From dawn to dusk.

Then sat outside on someone's roof and listened music
and talked about what's new until our mothers called us in.

And do you remember that one winter day when it snowed for
hours and hours, and we tried to build a snowman, or when
we made a game of raking leaves.

Or how about the time we gathered funny looking leaves from your back
yard and sold it to the neighbors next door.

And the big day when we took the training wgeels of our bikes.

But those days passed by like the speed of light, and we grew up, as children do
Until the day when we assumed that we were to grown up.

And when I see you
I know you've dhanged in ways I can't explain. You're like a flower
that blossomed before time and falls and becomes a victim in the
febuary frost.

???? :huh:

apoemtothedead
05/28/05, 03:21 PM
Anyone ever seen The Girl Next Door?/How is it?

IAmCountryMusic
05/28/05, 03:48 PM
Anyone ever seen The Girl Next Door?/How is it?
a big letdown if youre a hater of fake breasts

b e L I E v e
05/28/05, 04:37 PM
a big letdown if youre a hater of fake breasts

lmfao

good point

IAmCountryMusic
06/25/05, 04:36 AM
she never got real criticism

sunpoison
06/25/05, 11:03 AM
I think it's bad. Sorry.

ArTkY_
06/25/05, 01:12 PM
Is this about sex?

takingback98
07/01/05, 03:49 PM
Is this about sex?

no its more of a love story with pornstars.

ArTkY_
07/01/05, 04:14 PM
no its more of a love story with pornstars.
Oh... that's pretty cool, I guess.

A picasso blue
07/01/05, 06:53 PM
a big letdown if youre a hater of fake breasts

they were :( fake??


my entire reality is shattered...

The_Crowing
07/02/05, 12:47 PM
???? :huh:

Exactly.

cuetheflames
07/02/05, 04:56 PM
not bad.

i like the last line. when you say things like "febuary frost," it gives people an image in thier head. i like it.

good work.

xsilencedx
07/25/05, 06:53 PM
It doesnt flow at all

punkpixie
07/26/05, 04:48 AM
It's just to sentimental, and not in a good way..I think it's really cheesy..haha