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[merv the perv]

Pajamas with feet meet deep sleep in a half week. She says she won’t let go, and I won’t let go, so who’s left to let go? I’m in luck ‘cause I’m stuck with the one I want to be stuck with forever. Most people run around their whole lives looking for love. I just walked into it. Lucky me. Sticky me. And I can’t even grow sideburns yet.

[IAmCountryMusic]

being a little kid is pretty cool

[merv the perv]

Yeah it is.

[ArTkY_]

:D!

[merv the perv]

:D!


I hope that means you liked it :)

[ArTkY_]

I hope that means you liked it :)
I did :)

[merv the perv]

Then thank you, kind sir.

[IAmCountryMusic]

:D!
:neutral:!!!!

[merv the perv]

:neutral:!!!!

I hope that doesn't mean you didn't like it.....'cause your opinion's the only one that matters :(

[CircaEnder]

probably some of the best/most thought out meaningful lyrics on the board and im not joking
awesome man

[merv the perv]

probably some of the best/most thought out meaningful lyrics on the board and im not joking
awesome man


Thanks a lot :)

[merv the perv]

So..... I think somebody else should read these and give input.

[ArTkY_]

This still owns.

[merv the perv]

This still owns.


And you still own.....pwn even.

[IAmCountryMusic]

I hope that doesn't mean you didn't like it.....'cause your opinion's the only one that matters :(
:neutral:!!!! ;)

[extatic reality]

:animateds

[hopeinlies34]

good stuff man, I liked it. May I ask if this is derived from real life experiences, or just a thought that you had of young love?

[merv the perv]

It's all real life experience. I wrote these a couple weeks ago when my girlfriend was due to come home for summer in about a half a week. It was our first year apart, and it was tough. The whole pajamas with feet meets deep sleep is talking about how once she is back, i'll finally be comfortable and content. Some friends and I were driving around one night and we started talking about how cool pajamas with feet are and how comfortable they are, adding to that comfort theme. The part, "She says she won't let go...", was inspired by my girlfriend telling me, "When I get home I'm seriously not going to let go of you," and I told her I wouldn't let go of her either, and then I used it to symbolize being together forever. The rest is pretty self-explanitory I think.

[mondeoman]

Not bad. Not bad at all. I like how you said "Sticky Me." toward the end. I guess that was kind of anticipated from someone whose screenname is merv the perv. haha

[merv the perv]

Not bad. Not bad at all. I like how you said "Sticky Me." toward the end. I guess that was kind of anticipated from someone whose screenname is merv the perv. haha

Haha....thanks.....but that's not how I meant "sticky".....I just meant that I get lucky and I get attatched easily. Everyone thinks I'm such a huge pervert because of my user name.......oh well, I kinda am.

[mondeoman]

Haha....thanks.....but that's not how I meant "sticky".....I just meant that I get lucky and I get attatched easily. Everyone thinks I'm such a huge pervert because of my user name.......oh well, I kinda am.
haha that's ok. This site is like 70% guys and we're all the same way.

[Scott Irvine]

Am I the only one...ah..nevermind.

[OveriseFan]

Am I the only one...ah..nevermind.

yes... ;)

[merv the perv]

Am I the only one...ah..nevermind.

...only one who what...

[rockluvr]

i like the lyrics, and you... ;)

[ghost mountain]

wow, the only peom ive read so far on here i felt worty of a comment. very good.

[ShIbBY dUdE]

man i like it, it is really original, i think if you did turn this into a song it would be mad

[merv the perv]

i like the lyrics, and you... ;)

Thanks baby.

wow, the only peom ive read so far on here i felt worty of a comment. very good.

Thanks

man i like it, it is really original, i think if you did turn this into a song it would be mad

I'm working on it. When it's finished I'll let you know.

[crazy0122003]

its really good

[Ritalin]

heh i liked that it was like moving and funny at the same time. i didn;t even know that was possible

[OveriseFan]

I forgot about this poem...

so that one I read and said it was the first I liked I take that back. It's the second

yea, this still rules.

[merv the perv]

I forgot about this poem...

so that one I read and said it was the first I liked I take that back. It's the second

yea, this still rules.

You still rule.

[OveriseFan]

You still rule.

I'll be seeing you tonight haha.

[merv the perv]

I'll be seeing you tonight haha.

mmm....sex :love:

[OveriseFan]

mmm....sex :love:
actually I just meant we would have dinner...:madfire:

But if we happen to have sex so be it haha.:dance:

[merv the perv]

actually I just meant we would have dinner...:madfire:

But if we happen to have sex so be it haha.:dance:
Nummy

[OveriseFan]

Nummy
haha always living up to the name:boldred:

[merv the perv]

haha always living up to the name:boldred:I have no idea what that smiley thing is, but I like it.

[OveriseFan]

I have no idea what that smiley thing is, but I like it.
who cares he bounces up and down.

[merv the perv]

Yeah, he's pretty sweet.

[rockluvr]

[QUOTE=merv the perv]Thanks baby.

anytime :bigsmile:

[merv the perv]

haha this is old....I turned it into a song though. :)

[CellarGhosts]

short, yet sweet. in other words, i really liked it. it definatley wont appeal to some, but I enjoyed it. good job.

[OveriseFan]

HAHAHA

Oh man, this is so old.

[merv the perv]

HAHAHA

Oh man, this is so old.
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