Four Hats at Once!

[CellarGhosts]

So the title isn't relevant to anything (literally just taken from the last text message I received), the lyrics themselves aren't that strong and all in all it's not something I'm too sure about, but I felt like I had to post something here again. I mean, it feels nice to be writing again and I miss doing so, and the interaction here. I'll go for it.

So I crossed off another set of restless nights,
But I'm not up to task this time around.
I'm setting this one up for the inescapable punchline.
It's time I set my sights on something higher,
I'll admit this isn't what I really had in mind.

Oh and this is as good as it gets,
It's the most you'll ever hear from me.
I'm a half note from apology.

Couldn't accredit this to anyone else.
I'm fresh out of excuses and half-truths.
So I'll keep the cable connected.
I'm courting contradiction.

Oh and construction's crushing me this time.
I'm falling face first into a flatline.
Who cares? who gets it? I'll figure that one out someday.
For now I'll just settle for defeat.

[beau blood rush]

i really like this, the language you use isn't pretentious
and it's socially relevant for the people who'll read it.

[CellarGhosts]

i really like this, the language you use isn't pretentious
and it's socially relevant for the people who'll read it.
thanks alot, I appreciate it.

[TK]

So the title isn't relevant to anything (literally just taken from the last text message I received), the lyrics themselves aren't that strong and all in all it's not something I'm too sure about, but I felt like I had to post something here again. I mean, it feels nice to be writing again and I miss doing so, and the interaction here. I'll go for it.

So I crossed off another set of restless nights,
But I'm not up to task this time.
I'm setting this one up for the inescapable punchline.
It's time I set my sights on something higher,
I'll admit this isn't what I really had in mind.


Isn't "the" supposed to be after "to" in the second line? I really liked the first two lines, but the rest was eh. The rhyming almost got to the point of being annoying, but not quite.


Oh and this is as good as it gets,
It's the most you'll ever hear from me.
I'm a half note from apology.


I'm torn on this. Not very original, but I can relate to this, and I like it.


Couldn't accredit this to anyone else.
I'm fresh out of excuses and half-truths.
So I'll keep the cable connected.
I'm courting contradiction.


And again, not very original, but this was written well.


Oh and construction's crushing me this time.
I'm falling face first into a flatline.
Who cares? who gets it? I'll figure that one out someday.
For now I'll just settle for defeat.

Nice ending.

This seems very Taking Back Sunday to me. Overall, I thought it was very solid in a decent way. Nice to see you posting again

[bootsydan]

the lyrics themselves aren't that strong and all in all it's not something I'm too sure about

It seems you already understand the downfalls of this. So I won't go into detail.

but I felt like I had to post something here again. I mean, it feels nice to be writing again and I miss doing so, and the interaction here. I'll go for it.

I hear this.

[CellarGhosts]

Isn't "the" supposed to be after "to" in the second line? I really liked the first two lines, but the rest was eh. The rhyming almost got to the point of being annoying, but not quite.



I'm torn on this. Not very original, but I can relate to this, and I like it.



And again, not very original, but this was written well.



Nice ending.

This seems very Taking Back Sunday to me. Overall, I thought it was very solid in a decent way. Nice to see you posting again
Thank you for the input. It's far from being anything original but it's where I'm at right now I guess.