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Baby Blue Sedan
12/15/08, 09:00 AM
A song i'm working on, i'm a serious amateur at songwriting so im proud of it, it's my first complete song.


You have nothing going on in your mind

A clear painted picture of pavement and two yellow lines

You don't know where to go, where to run, where to hide

Life feels like sitting below high voltage power lines that are

Sprouting in the countryside, lasting long after you die

Rusting slowly like an forgotten carnival ride

No sleep, 2 am looking at the stars

Funny thing is, you have no idea who you are

But you seem so small, you seem so small


You climbed the tree

Branch by Branch, hand by hand, a fistful of leaves, a headful of dreams

You couldnt reach the top, i cant say why except for

every step you made you stopped, when you made progress you dropped

you got confused went up then down, broke a branch and fell to the ground

all confused inside and out, the best way out just walk away

or maybe starting over, but not today

your too worked out its better just to stay

its just another day, the same as the rest

where you have nothing on your mind

except yellow lines and power lines.

Killyoursound
01/02/09, 04:46 PM
Not bad at all! I like it. I'm waiting for another one (: