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[Deception]

im so in love with your lies, still in love with this pain, i learned to love the tears, the blood, those wasted years. i found away to love your distance...you were so close now i cant reach you. killing me tenderly...pulling my heart off this sleeve, you watched me bleed, you mocked my passion...you were just a fake. i found you out to late. just a warning of something else i love, i'll love to see your smile soak my sorrow, i'll love the night you remember my back turned. start pulling those memories fast...im not your advatage to take. im not your joke to laugh to. remember this face, remember the things i love, paint this poem into a beautiful tatoo, without forgeting i refuse to love you.





Tell me what you think.

[apoemtothedead]

I hope your condoms break more frequently.

[IAmCountryMusic]

is this the one about how your dad hates you and how youre going through a rebellous stage, when suddenly the condom breaks?

[ArTkY_]

I don't love you either.

[IAmCountryMusic]

being sad in kansas is pretty cool i guess

[ArTkY_]

emo is pretty cool i guess.

[IAmCountryMusic]

the get up kids?

[Brianfarg]

I think your next one should be "An Ode to Birth Control"

[Deception]

ha, sorry but i didnt write this one, my very good friend did. She writes alot of poetry.

[IAmCountryMusic]

ha, sorry but i didnt write this one, my very good friend did. She writes alot of poetry.
then why did you post it as your own?

[Deception]

I never said it was mine, but i can see why you'd assume that, i put no name. The person who wrote it is one of my good friends, the one who cuts. she just found out that her year long bf cheated on her.

[IAmCountryMusic]

I never said it was mine, but i can see why you'd assume that, i put no name. The person who wrote it is one of my good friends, the one who cuts. she just found out that her year long bf cheated on her.
im sorry, ive been cheated on 3 times and it sucks really bad.

[Deception]

im sorry, ive been cheated on 3 times and it sucks really bad.

Im sorry.

[ArTkY_]

im sorry, ive been cheated on 3 times and it sucks really bad.
That blows. My gf broke up with me to go out with someone else 2 days later. I don't know if she cheated on me though.

[chasingsafety]

i feel sorry for the midwest

[quAiL_56]

yes yes, the midwest sucks....not to exciting, just rows of corn! I liked what you wrote.....maybe a name will come to you soon, or who ever wrote this.

[IAmCountryMusic]

That blows. My gf broke up with me to go out with someone else 2 days later. I don't know if she cheated on me though.
i went out with 3 girls at the same time in 10th grade and i dont think i ever broke up with the one.