Don't let me down (What you thinking)?

[LastMikeDown]

Been working on this, It's getting there maybe a new hook for the chorus, thoughts?

V1

We'll all suffer things no one should see
Hidden ashamed, our dark memories
seal it shut, lock it up, throw away the key

It's hard to speak, stood biting your tongue
grinding our teeth, till we're bleeding at the gums
Fake a grin, hold it in, whats become of us

C

Don't let me down, your safest secrets
all buried underground

Don't let me down, when your guilty heart
decides to let it out
If your head gets heavy enough, you'll have to
give it up, when thoughts become a sound
Don't let me down
Don't let me down

[thespearkid]

Cliche cliche cliche.

[Leerycist]

i'd have to agree, these are some of the more obvious ones: dark memories, lock it up, throw away the key, don't let me down, your safest secrets, guilty heart, don't let me down (again)

maybe try to think of some imagery more specific to the situation you're writing about