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beau blood rush
12/22/08, 05:07 AM
just some poo i've been writing up lately.
my keyboard doesn't work, who needs the eight key anyways, it's probably looks better as a word.



snore the dust off the door - byte my tongue
one-ups for guts we never knew you had
i traded up best laid plans for laying down
the headaches we're never the same again

blew kisses to love - bounced off walls
nobody wants to see the boy fall

my knackered joints are on knee's
- put my chest in a sling
camera smiles only coming out in the dark
but not quite glowing

goosebumps mapping out my thoughts again
as if the rings around my eyes weren't enough to draw you in

i need a 'his and hers' system crash for 'bashful boys' and 'pass girls'
cause all the blushes have taken a turn for the worse

i'm na-na-narcoleptic, pickin' fights with love
''don't worry i'm stayin' busy'' oh, oh, no
pullin' myself apart for the stitch back up
oh the trips are worth every scar

saw the la-la lamppost swallow loneliness when it traded vows with the pavement
said, I said
said, I said
''what i'd give to be caught in between''

oh fake a smile, oh oh fake a smile
and swear me you'll keep this awkward
if i only knew i had you swooning i wouldn't have bothered


''greetings'' from the infirmary
of coarse, I've been keeping clean
it goes without saying, when i say your on your own
and i hope it cuts right to the bone


there's something so romantic about a shot in the dark
kisses blur--
blew them in the back of hollowed out cars


oh fake a smile, oh oh fake a smile
and swear me you'll keep this awkward
if i only knew i had you swooning i wouldn't have bothered

stendhal
12/23/08, 12:41 AM
I've still not decided if I really like you, or I'm being tricked...

Just know that with each piece I read of yours, I lean more towards knowing It's not some ruse.

Keep it up.

Oh, and this wasn't your best.

beau blood rush
12/23/08, 02:00 AM
thanks tons man, that actually really means a lot.
cos' the last thing i want to do is have my writing come across as fake or forced
- every word is actually me, whether people take it or not.

last thing i want to do is trick people.

so cheers man, and yeh this is just a whole lot of doodling working on the originality in my language