Hidden

[X_bRoKeNhEaRt_X]

[U]"Hidden"

Hidden deep in the darkness of her room
Lies the spirit of a girl
who no longer lives
She closed the door
On what used to be her life
She wondered
If she could live her life a lie (original words)

Sitting there on her bed,
listening to the song
that made her think
she could live just one more day
Asking herself now why she
didn't leave this world behind
a couple months before the day
all humiliation broke loose
They laughed and pointed
and afterwards whispered in each others ears
talking about her
plotting against her

Sitting there now
writing a goodbye note
with a knife lying by her side
she signed the goodbye and
took one last look around the room
Taking the knife
she put an end to her life
with one last breath

The story only made
the second page news...
her parents cried and her family mourned the death of their love, the oldest child, the first-born
Her schoolmates sighed
in hope it wasn't her,
her being the girl that
they humiliated horribly

Today, hidden beneath the ground, with
a gravestone that says,
"Rest in peace, you are forever loved and always will your spirit remain."

[punkpixie]

yawn.

I'd like to think this is autobiographical, but sadly here you are still posting. Shame.

[kimosabe]

@''X_bRoKeNhEaRt_X' :
I can't decide what i like more, your poem or your screen name. both so original and cool. good work!

[sunpoison]

Hey, maybe this is about how we mocked her first song. Read the lyrics.

Sitting there on her bed,
listening to the song
that made her think
she could live just one more day
Asking herself now why she
didn't leave this world behind
a couple months before the day
all humiliation broke loose
They laughed and pointed
and afterwards whispered in each others ears
talking about her
plotting against her


Am I sharp or what?!

[takingback98]

"She tried to separate the space
between love and lies"
-her poem

"seperate the space
between love and lies"
-Hawthorne Heights - The Transition

[Signals Corrupted]

"She tried to separate the space
between love and lies"
-her poem

"seperate the space
between love and lies"
-Hawthorne Heights - The Transition



ah, great minds obviously think alike.

[A picasso blue]

Hey, maybe this is about how we mocked her first song. Read the lyrics.



Am I sharp or what?!

They laughed and pointed
and afterwards whispered in each others ears
talking about her
plotting against her

Sitting there now
writing a goodbye note
with a knife lying by her side
she signed the goodbye and
took one last look around the room
Taking the knife
she put an end to her life
with one last breath

i wonder if it follows through as real as the first part sounds..

[Mark is God]

Youuuuuuuuuuuu Still Suckkkkkkkkkkkk

[takingback98]

ah, great minds obviously think alike.

haha

[sunpoison]

They laughed and pointed
and afterwards whispered in each others ears
talking about her
plotting against her

Sitting there now
writing a goodbye note
with a knife lying by her side
she signed the goodbye and
took one last look around the room
Taking the knife
she put an end to her life
with one last breath

i wonder if it follows through as real as the first part sounds..
Maybe that's why she hasn't posted since.

[Brianfarg]

"She tried to separate the space
between love and lies"
-her poem

"seperate the space
between love and lies"
-Hawthorne Heights - The Transition

Good call.

[Alex Djaferis]

yawn.

I'd like to think this is autobiographical, but sadly here you are still posting. Shame.

lol. i love your evil side

[punkpixie]

lol. i love your evil side

haha doesn't everyone?

[ArTkY_]

"She tried to separate the space
between love and lies"
-her poem

"seperate the space
between love and lies"
-Hawthorne Heights - The Transition
Haha, pwnt.

haha doesn't everyone?
Indeed.

[merv the perv]

Hahaha, if you're going to steal from a band, at least steal from a good band.

[IAmCountryMusic]

...shine on diamond eyes.

[takingback98]

Hahaha, if you're going to steal from a band, at least steal from a good band.

excellent point.

[ArTkY_]

Is it possible to suck this badly?

[X_bRoKeNhEaRt_X]

What are yall talking about I wrote that poem a year a ago...b4 I had even heard of Hawthorne Heights..plus i had a typo...there was a different part...i just had it wrong...i didn't have the poem with me

[afk999]

bad

[ShIbBY dUdE]

i couldn't manage to read the whole poem or what ever it was ment to be, the replies and feedback to it was far more interesting than anything you could write