You Act Like You're Ordinary.

[11:11]

Because it's only in my dreams that I see
You lovlier than I see you now
I need to accept that melodies can't bring
You closer, and winter pushes you away
Hands fold; eyes glow
You don't notice a thing.

Call me suicidal; I'm wasting my birthday wish
"Please place your hand in mine"; I swear it's warm now
And I'm sorry the room's crashing down
It's been known to do that; you've been
Known to do that too.

Because it's only in my dreams
That I can say your name without breaking down
Your face makes a beautiful sunrise
The sky engulfed by your blue eyes
Hair falls; heart implodes
It's a regular thing

Call me suicidal; I'm wasting my birthday wish
"Please take me for yourself"; I swear I'm ok now
And I'm sorry I can't find the words to say
I've been known to do that, and
It's all because of you.

[Killyoursound]

"place your hand in mine", isn't it?

I really like it, by the way.

[squeakers18]

wow this is good really liked it

[11:11]

"place your hand in mine", isn't it?

I really like it, by the way.
Thanks. Fixed.

[thespearkid]

Try not to
Cut off your
Thoughts in
The middle of
You phrasing
Them by starting
New lines because
It gets
Annoying to read
When you feel as
If you're pausing every
Few seconds

Oh, and watch the cliches.

[Chigwinkle]

Try not to
Cut off your
Thoughts in
The middle of
You phrasing
Them by starting
New lines because
It gets
Annoying to read
When you feel as
If you're pausing every
Few seconds

Oh, and watch the cliches.

Ahh, the truth hurts xD

[11:11]

Try not to
Cut off your
Thoughts in
The middle of
You phrasing
Them by starting
New lines because
It gets
Annoying to read
When you feel as
If you're pausing every
Few seconds

Oh, and watch the cliches.
The first I have an excuse for. That's how I seperate the lyrics when I sing. The second? I've got nothing. But thanks for the criticism Dion.