two poems, comments?

[allisander]

first:
look how you've made me
from all the words you speak
just look how you've made me
at the knees i am weak
now i fall to your feet
is this all i'm good for?
is this the pleasure you seek?
is that what i look like?
some little circus freak?
now look how you've made me
your lies they still reek
sitting on the back of your tounge
just waiting, waiting to dumb
every word you say,
and every thought you think;
yet still not enough for me to care...

second:
my flesh, because of you has grown
upon my frame its newly sewn
but now you rip it off my bones
this devilish monster as you are now known
all because you were so bored
my blood is covering the floor
my heart now able to love no more
my soul you left, its ripped and torn
and now that you are finally done
i'm sad to say, but yes, you've won
because of this creature you have become.