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[ShoelickerBilly]

i think this should be to a slower tempo, but since i cannot write music im not really sure what would fit best...

i sit here in silence
and listen to the violence
of this paradoxical world that we're living in

ive become so jaded
in this world so faded
with a poison coursing its way through my veins
and that poison is you...

anyways, i got bored at work and started to write this...i cant think of a chorus which will come next so im gonna stop here and edit it later

[Mark is God]

no talent yet either.

[takingback98]

it sounds like every other song, sorry

[ArTkY_]

lol...

[nfgguitardude]

True, every other song. Too cliche' - crawl outside your box and spend lots of time on lyrics. Originality makes your lyrics stand out.

[Mark is God]

it sounds to me like you had a good idea with the first 3 lines, wrote that down, then tried to replicate that in the next part, and it just didnt naturally come out right. (thats a subtle hint that the first part was the better half). thats what my impression was, cuz i do the same thing all the time
your avatar rules.

[ArTkY_]

Skifree.

[ArTkY_]

that game was rigged. or were you supposed to get eaten every single time...?
You get eaten everytime. I loved it though.

[ArTkY_]

Anyways, this song blows a fat cock out of it's ass.

[ShIbBY dUdE]

its like i have heard it a million times before

[are fkng dead]

sucks