Forgotten

[Alex Djaferis]

Had a little twiddle with a pen. Here is the result :)



we are playing out our lives
like actors forgetting their lines
we keep on talking
but we dont know if we should
carry on walking
like children lost in the woods
i find myself watching
walls and apparitions

can you hear the whispers?
stealing your sanity?

we sleep in constant battle
through our waking lives
we cast our votes for this life
without using our eyes
we are so old and medieval
modern crusades are raging
the renaissance was a farce
free fuel for all with ego's

can you hear the sirens?
spill blood of the innocent?

dug in our roots like the trees
we stand firm with beliefs
we are the lost and the bored
we are the forgotten

[BeautifulHatred]

I really like it. But then again most people think I'm crazy. Take it at face value while I sit lost in my loneliness and desolate dreams.

[Alex Djaferis]

hey thanks alot for those comments :)

[punkpixie]

Alex, I really like that. Good stuff.

[ArTkY_]

Liked it a lot, nice work.

Sounds kind of Thrice like in the last 3 lines, lol.

[Alex Djaferis]

thanks everyone :)

hahayea tariq, what can i say, thrice own me. My subconcious must have good taste!

[ArTkY_]

Haha, I might be crazy but:

we stand firm with beliefs
we are the lost and the bored
we are the forgotten

we are the ones who lost our faith
we dug ourselves an early grave
we are the dead, can we be saved?

Whatever, I'm just being overanalytical, it was really good.

[Alex Djaferis]

lol. haha. i didnt even think of :all thats left. nice one tariq :)

[ShIbBY dUdE]

wow man, nice use of words, i like it.

[Alex Djaferis]

wow man, nice use of words, i like it.

thank you:)