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Vanity__Dearest
07/12/05, 04:48 PM
passion like a plague (empenada)

the ( writing )...is the surname of the song we use when we play...i'd like to see what people get out of this..then i'll post what i feel i wrote it on.

Darling, pack your wears.
There’s a storm brewing, and we need to pack out of this battleground.
a handful of cyanide, our roses to plant,
We brace for attack.

Drink the cold harsh water out of the only hose in town.
Around these parts, they carry coffins and their concepts.
A brighter future is torn apart by daybreak.

I’ve sighed one too many times
“they won’t touch you. It’s urgent…they won’t touch you, it’s reckless”
Her lips like vendetta antennas
They beg me to kiss her metal mutiny.

And there’s this little sexual kitten. She dances her way on the train tracks. She begs for limbs to feel the forceful love.
We had our wishes in this godforsaken town.
on these god forsaken lungs, we have snake cut tongues.

And the linen found it’s way to the clothesline.
To clean the only part we could find ourselves clean in.
This start of flesh, hasn’t fleshed itself out.

I’ve sighed one too many times for you to take this seriously
“they won’t touch you. It’s urgent…they won’t touch you, it’s reckless”
The lips like vendetta antennas
They beg me to kiss her metal mutiny.

We’ve lost our faith in this revival.
The guys look at the prey just to tear it apart.
These cold hard stares, with soiled hearts.
And blood as thick as cloudy throats.

pandorasXfallen
07/12/05, 11:13 PM
Different from your other one, but I still love it. Your style is quite intriguing. If you get a recording of this, do send it my way. [grins]

Vanity__Dearest
07/14/05, 12:48 PM
*bump* i'd like to see anyone comment...i;f the other songs all get at least 30 replies...asking for anything here.

punkpixie
07/14/05, 03:13 PM
passion like a plague (empenada)

the ( writing )...is the surname of the song we use when we play...i'd like to see what people get out of this..then i'll post what i feel i wrote it on.

Darling, pack your wears.
There’s a storm brewing, and we need to pack out of this battleground.
a handful of cyanide, our roses to plant,
We brace for attack.

Drink the cold harsh water out of the only hose in town.
Around these parts, they carry coffins and their concepts.
A brighter future is torn apart by daybreak.

I’ve sighed one too many times
“they won’t touch you. It’s urgent…they won’t touch you, it’s reckless”
Her lips like vendetta antennas
They beg me to kiss her metal mutiny.

And there’s this little sexual kitten. She dances her way on the train tracks. She begs for limbs to feel the forceful love.
We had our wishes in this godforsaken town.
on these god forsaken lungs, we have snake cut tongues.

And the linen found it’s way to the clothesline.
To clean the only part we could find ourselves clean in.
This start of flesh, hasn’t fleshed itself out.

I’ve sighed one too many times for you to take this seriously
“they won’t touch you. It’s urgent…they won’t touch you, it’s reckless”
The lips like vendetta antennas
They beg me to kiss her metal mutiny.

We’ve lost our faith in this revival.
The guys look at the prey just to tear it apart.
These cold hard stares, with soiled hearts.
And blood as thick as cloudy throats.

Great. Fucking great.

Vanity__Dearest
07/14/05, 08:58 PM
Great. Fucking great.
thank you ellie :)..your opinion counts.

cloudscollide
07/15/05, 09:53 AM
I like your stuff, man. good writing for sure.

Vanity__Dearest
07/15/05, 10:02 AM
thanks...i can already tell i could enjoy you..most "metal kids" are pricks...if you ever feel like talking on aim the sn is:thisiselegance...talk to me whenever you want to.

Hilikus
07/15/05, 11:01 AM
another sick song dude. I gotta hear you sing these.

OveriseFan
07/24/05, 08:29 AM
That rules.

I like you writing too, recording ever?

Vanity__Dearest
07/25/05, 10:29 AM
yeah, i've been recording with my band for awhile now..trying to put out an ep...i have one guy who's a huge control freak tho...i'm thinking of putting this stuff to acoustic guitar with tech backgrounds now...i'll keep you posted on if i stay with the demo or not.

ArTkY_
07/25/05, 11:43 AM
Fucking AMAZING, like all your other work.

Vanity__Dearest
07/25/05, 12:08 PM
i'll have another piece or two up today...:)

and thank you tariq :)