My Excuse is "It Was New Years"

[eliselovesmusic]

Another song that I'd appreciate an honest opinion about :)


Everybody knows his name,
But that's what makes th girls get jealous.
You've only got a one year time frame,
So you're damn well making the best of -

CHORUS:
A bed situation.
You know it's your distiny to be alone when
That list of invites to the wedidng includes only you.

"A kiss on the cheek?" said Little Bo Peep
Even angels need their satasfaction.
But just watch yourself,
You're so damn low,
The downward slope can't get any more steep.
She said "Wow! So I hear you know all my friends,
And all of my other friend's friends.
Anything else you'd like to tell me?"
"Does Jacinda count as a friend?"

CHORUS

The bride is dressed in black -
She can't where white for obvious reasons.
He left the girl in France without her Visa and said:
"Hey now, I've got to run.
I remembered a burlesque girl who wants my neck for saying
'It was all in fun' "

You can't blame the kiss goodnight,
It's what happened on that second date,
Lascivious leads to well-concieved fate.

CHORUS

[Chigwinkle]

I quite liked this song, especially the last verse. Theres a couple of typos you might want to fix (In the first verse you missed out the e on 'the', and in the chorus you spelt wedding wrong).

But really nice, I like how you use dialogue during the 2nd and 3rd verses, keep it up.