Problems

[DaKilla623]

Im running out of money, im running out of time
im running out of pills, im losing my mind
im running out of money, im running out of time
im running out of pills, im losing my mind

HUNGER, DEPRESSION, ADDICTION, OBSESSION
HUNGER, DEPRESSION, ADDICTION, OBSESSION
HUNGER, DEPRESSION, ADDICTION, OBSESSION
HUNGER, DEPRESSION, ADDICTION, OBSESSION! FUCK!

every day, i feel stress, all around me, i see death
every day, i feel stress, all around me, i see death!

HUNGER, DEPRESSION, ADDICTION, OBSESSION
HUNGER, DEPRESSION, ADDICTION, OBSESSION
HUNGER, DEPRESSION, ADDICTION, OBSESSION
HUNGER. DEPRESSION, ADDICTION, OBSESSION! FUCK!

I cant take this fucked up world anymore!
(imagine a guitar solo, then pretend like the song ended then comes back to life)

Everything around me is falling apart
nothing had a chance from the fucking start
everyone i know, every one i hate, is lying to themselves, is lying to my face
got to get out of this psychopathic maze, got to get out before its too late
got to get out, before i kill myself, got to get out, i need some help!

END

this song is straight form the heart cause its about my life
Its a crust type song cause my band is really into toxic narcotic
what you guys think?

[bootsydan]

Woo! I fucking love songs like these.

This part was my favourite:

(imagine a guitar solo, then pretend like the song ended then comes back to life)

followed closely by this part:

HUNGER, DEPRESSION, ADDICTION, OBSESSION! FUCK!



Edit: Also for the guitar solo - I was kind of imagining like a George Harrison-esque type thing. You know, very "Sgt. Peppers" era. 60's pop. Was I close?

[DaKilla623]

Woo! I fucking love songs like these.

This part was my favourite:



followed closely by this part:





Edit: Also for the guitar solo - I was kind of imagining like a George Harrison-esque type thing. You know, very "Sgt. Peppers" era. 60's pop. Was I close?

Na but that would actually work haha

[a speedo model]

Is this one of those joke songs that aren't actually funny?

[Mitch]

Why would it be a joke? It's amazing--takes me back to when I listened to nu-metal!

[a speedo model]

Actually reading it as a Slipknot song does somehow make it better...

[cris545]

I love how this made me laugh and I didn't even read it. That's some quality shit right there.

[bootsydan]

Na but that would actually work haha

Yeah! Haha!

[more heart]

I couldn't come into here with a serious thought knowing DaKilla made this thread

[ThisIsSuchAPity]

Great thread. Would read again.

[thespearkid]

My favorite part was when I hit the red X in the top corner of my screen.

[ThisIsSuchAPity]

this song is straight form the heart cause its about my life
Its a crust type song cause my band is really into toxic narcotic
what you guys think?

1. What the fuck is a crust type song?


2. Who?

[Smeee]

1. What the fuck is a crust type song?


2. Who?

This. What the hell is toxic narcotic?!

[EatItSucka]

This. What the hell is toxic narcotic?!
Its a band.

Crust is a genre.

[bootsydan]

This. What the hell is toxic narcotic?!

Its a band.

Crust is a genre.

Only people with names like 'DaKilla' or 'EatItSucka' would know these things.

[zombie89]

Hey i like this bit the most!

"Everything around me is falling apart
nothing had a chance from the fucking start"
xx

[ThisIsSuchAPity]

Only people with names like 'DaKilla' or 'EatItSucka' would know these things.

lol

[GoWaitInTheCar]

I can see where you are going with this..

[theMATEOlife]

Its a shitty band.

Crust is not really music.

Edited for clarity.

[erthgual]

I like your last verse.
I know that sometimes everything looks bleak, but maybe bleak is bright.

[erthgual]

Keep working on the song up until a point you feel fully satisfied, though. :-)