Chalk hearts

[Ritalin]

yes i am aware that it's very odd, it was written at three in the morning what do you exspect?

Fall down scrape you knee the blood washes away all the broken hearts
Drawn in florescent pink sidewalk chalk
By five year olds who don't know what they mean
just drawn as part of the day dream
And everybody knows but nobody will say
Just why everything had to change!
I don’t wanna grow up
I just want to play around
With things I don’t understand now
But in this reality
I’ll know it all eventually
One day just melts into another
Perpetual slumber
What’s life waiting for?
You’ll be back someday I’m sure
But I ain’t holding my breath
I don’t wanna grow up
I just want to play around
With things I don’t understand now
But in this reality
I’ll know it all eventually
Something tells me it’s not worth it
Something tells me something is wrong
Pick all the broken pieces
Cuz I was right all along!
I don’t wanna grow up
I just want to play around
With things I don’t understand now
But in this reality
I’ll know it all eventually
Re draw all the broken hearts
Fix them with acid green sidewalk chalk!

[Ritalin]

this one dosen't have a title. i wrote it ages ago. i figured i'd just re use this post to uhh post it. cuz i'm just nice like that.

Land of the free ALL strings attached
Defender of democracy if you’ll ignore the facts
All men created equal so long as you’re THEIR men
Stand up for your rights and you’ll end up DEAD!
I pledge allegiance to bringing down it all
And I won’t stop rebelling until I see the fall
Of Republican hypocrisy
And all around stupidity
The values of America since it began!
One-sided media, government’s happy drones
Hell bent on turning you into a happy government clone
FCC silences all THEY don’t want us to hear
Fuck dammit were being SILENCED here!
I pledge allegiance to bringing down it all
And I won’t stop rebelling until I see the fall
Of Republican hypocrisy
And all around stupidity
The values of America since it began!
No one is free
When you be who they want you to be
Yell out for your OWN fucking sake!
Or it’ll be more then your voice that they take!
Save your freedom, don’t let them take it away
Save your life don’t let them take it away!
I pledge allegiance to bringing down it all
And I won’t stop rebelling until I see the fall
Of Republican hypocrisy
And all around stupidity
The values of America since it began!

[OveriseFan]

eh... the last one's a little...

too political for me haha.

The first however, is good, minus the chorus, re-write that.

All I can hear is "I don't wanna grow up, I'm a toys R us kid"

the last 2 lines in the chorus are all right though.

[Ritalin]

eh... the last one's a little...

too political for me haha.

The first however, is good, minus the chorus, re-write that.

All I can hear is "I don't wanna grow up, I'm a <a href='http://consumeralertsystem.com/cas/zx-hclick.php?hid=106' target='_blank'>toys</a> R us kid"

the last 2 lines in the chorus are all right though.
lmao, heh how'd you know the toys r us song is the background music of my life? Xd yeah i was thinking it was a little bit to corny. the seccond one was writen after litening to a lot of penny wise and system of a down folwed by the american idiot cd. yeah a lot of anti bush vibes bouncing around.

[OveriseFan]

hahah i completely agree with you hahaha ... the first song isn't too bad... just toys r us is in my head after reading it

we should submit it there, maybe it'll get on a commercial...

or better yet KIDS BOP!!!! :bigsmile:

[Ritalin]

we should submit it there, maybe it'll get on a commercial...

or better yet KIDS BOP!!!! :bigsmile:
Yes! then i can die with all my major goals acomplished! w00t!