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Authentik
07/24/05, 08:48 PM
Not great but its something for yall to read and ridicule at your liking:

I refuse to go without a fight
I do wrong and you do right
I'd swallow my tounge
And choke and you'd discourage me
And claim it'd be out of pity
While I pity you the loser the true
I should feel bad for the cuts down your arm
But your the one that put yourself in harm
The many times you've overdose
But those are the pills that you chose
But your the emo bitch in this game
And you claim that I'm the same
But only you've contemplated suicide
So you may journey to the other side
But only you act on your thoughts
While I await the sound of shots
In Stun the drop of a gun
The drop of a blade
Spilling the blood
Of crimson shade

ShIbBY dUdE
07/24/05, 11:43 PM
and i'm not just saying this because of you signature, but it has a my chemical romance vibe to it...

punkpixie
07/25/05, 09:14 AM
You spelt 'tongue' wrong

Authentik
07/25/05, 09:27 AM
it was a typo (tongue) why do u people constantly complain about spelling it's annoying

punkpixie
07/25/05, 09:44 AM
it was a typo (tongue) why do u people constantly complain about spelling it's annoying

Because how can you possibly be capable of writing poetry worth reading if you can't spell? Just a thought....

ArTkY_
07/25/05, 11:38 AM
Not good but not bad either. Keep trying, and I don't say that to anyone... at all.

Brianfarg
07/25/05, 12:51 PM
You spelt 'tongue' wrong

I love you...

But your the emo bitch in this game
And you claim that I'm the same

Inspiring, really.

Authentik
07/25/05, 03:56 PM
it wasn't a spelling error it was a typo error twit.

Brianfarg
07/25/05, 04:24 PM
it wasn't a spelling error it was a typo error twit.

Pardon me if I'm wrong, but wouldn't a spelling error be considered a typo?

Authentik
07/25/05, 05:06 PM
no a typo is an error made mabye kuz u typed to kwikly or finger slipped a spelling error is u dont know how to spell that particular word

ArTkY_
07/25/05, 07:21 PM
no a typo is an error made mabye kuz u typed to kwikly or finger slipped a spelling error is u dont know how to spell that particular word
Eww, that's an ugly sentence.

Brianfarg
07/25/05, 07:48 PM
Eww, that's an ugly sentence.

So was that entire sentence one giant typo or is she just stupid?

ArTkY_
07/25/05, 08:18 PM
So was that entire sentence one giant typo or is she just stupid?
Fucking both.

Authentik
07/25/05, 11:28 PM
1. I am a he dipshit 2. dont come in here starting shit u lil Instigators(sp)

punkpixie
07/26/05, 04:18 AM
no a typo is an error made mabye kuz u typed to kwikly or finger slipped a spelling error is u dont know how to spell that particular word
hahahahaha. Oh god...

That sentence just further proves you know nothing, and everyone else is better than you. Now go away.

Brianfarg
07/26/05, 07:36 PM
1. I am a he dipshit 2. dont come in here starting shit u lil Instigators(sp)

You're a guy?

Authentik
07/27/05, 10:06 AM
yes u twit

ArTkY_
07/27/05, 10:22 AM
yes u twit
Hmm, couldn't tell.. I wonder why...

OveriseFan
07/27/05, 10:39 AM
yes u twit
so GUYS like My Chemical Shitance?

oh woops, typo!

LOLZ!!!!!!!!!!!111212121one!!!21211

so "y" do "u" "lyke" "MCR!!!"

cause I hope you're not a gay and think they're hot.

They're vampires.... that would be awkward.

Brianfarg
07/27/05, 12:00 PM
yes u twit

You're a shame to real men and pirates everywhere.

punkpixie
07/27/05, 12:00 PM
so GUYS like My Chemical Shitance?

oh woops, typo!

LOLZ!!!!!!!!!!!111212121one!!!21211

so "y" do "u" "lyke" "MCR!!!"

cause I hope you're not a gay and think they're hot.

They're vampires.... that would be awkward.
What kind of guy has one of those lame animated fan boy signatures? A gay one that's who.

Brianfarg
07/27/05, 12:12 PM
"Favorite Books:
Books and me don't go together..."

That says so much.

punkpixie
07/27/05, 12:15 PM
Haha. Yes it does, but didn't you get the memo? J.R.R Tolkien never read books either and look what he achieved!!!1111lololol

Brianfarg
07/28/05, 10:26 AM
To quote Iamcountrymusic: "Screamo is cool I guess."

OveriseFan
07/28/05, 01:41 PM
"Favorite Books:
Books and me don't go together..."

That says so much.wow...

You're right.

That says a million in just 6 words(hell even make it 7 cause one's a contraction)

Brianfarg
07/28/05, 03:01 PM
wow...

You're right.

That says a million in just 6 words(hell even make it 7 cause one's a contraction)

It also says, "I can't read."

Authentik
07/28/05, 04:20 PM
You people have no life. All you do is sit at home, on your computer, bashing people you've never even met before, just to make yourselves feel "cool" or something, it's rather sad...

OveriseFan
07/28/05, 05:24 PM
You people have no life. All you do is sit at home, on your computer, bashing people you've never even met before, just to make yourselves feel "cool" or something, it's rather sad...
I know it is, I was gonna play manhunt tonight actually, but everyone ditched me.

My life IS pathetic isn't it?

But at least vampires who make "nu-screamo" don't make it worse by infiltrating my ears with their shit!

It also says, "I can't read."
oh good God.

Brianfarg
07/28/05, 08:47 PM
But at least vampires who make "nu-screamo" don't make it worse by infiltrating my ears with their shit!

Zing!

ArTkY_
07/28/05, 09:22 PM
To quote Iamcountrymusic: "Screamo is cool I guess."
And what a quote it is!

Brianfarg
07/29/05, 05:20 AM
And what a quote it is!

I miss it.

ArTkY_
07/29/05, 07:33 AM
I miss it.
I know. :(

I liked DJ, despite most people's opinions of him.

Brianfarg
07/29/05, 07:36 AM
I know. :(

I liked DJ, despite most people's opinions of him.

He's not around anymore?

ArTkY_
07/29/05, 07:37 AM
He's not around anymore?
Nope, he's with his girlfriend.

OveriseFan
07/29/05, 08:10 AM
Nope, he's with his girlfriend.
:(

He ruled. haha.

punkpixie
07/29/05, 02:12 PM
ahh DJ. I miss his annoying ass. hahaha

Brianfarg
07/30/05, 05:26 PM
Nope, he's with his girlfriend.

I had one of those once. Unfortunately, I now reproduce asexually.

your revolution
08/01/05, 02:19 AM
You spelt 'tongue' wrongyou spelled 'spelled' wrong. haha

Not great but its something for yall to read and ridicule at your liking:

I refuse to go without a fight
I do wrong and you do right
I'd swallow my tounge
And choke and you'd discourage me
And claim it'd be out of pity
While I pity you the loser the true
I should feel bad for the cuts down your arm
But your the one that put yourself in harm
The many times you've overdose
But those are the pills that you chose
But your the emo bitch in this game
And you claim that I'm the same
But only you've contemplated suicide
So you may journey to the other side
But only you act on your thoughts
While I await the sound of shots
In Stun the drop of a gun
The drop of a blade
Spilling the blood
Of crimson shadeyour shitty poetry reputation preceeds you.

You people have no life. All you do is sit at home, on your computer, bashing people you've never even met before, just to make yourselves feel "cool" or something, it's rather sad...yes, we fuck with people like you. yes it makes us feel cool. yes we bash others as well. no your poetry will never be good. yes it will always be shitty. yes you can stop posting now. clear enough? yes.

ShIbBY dUdE
08/01/05, 04:49 AM
you spelled 'spelled' wrong. haha

your shitty poetry reputation preceeds you.

yes, we fuck with people like you. yes it makes us feel cool. yes we bash others as well. no your poetry will never be good. yes it will always be shitty. yes you can stop posting now. clear enough? yes.hahaha

punkpixie
08/01/05, 07:38 AM
you spelled 'spelled' wrong. haha

your shitty poetry reputation preceeds you.

yes, we fuck with people like you. yes it makes us feel cool. yes we bash others as well. no your poetry will never be good. yes it will always be shitty. yes you can stop posting now. clear enough? yes.Technically I didn't because I wrote 'spelt' which isn't even a word at all. So boo and yah!

ArTkY_
08/01/05, 08:00 AM
you spelled 'spelled' wrong. haha

your shitty poetry reputation preceeds you.

yes, we fuck with people like you. yes it makes us feel cool. yes we bash others as well. no your poetry will never be good. yes it will always be shitty. yes you can stop posting now. clear enough? yes.
Hahahahaha, that was one of the funniest things I've ever read. Useless scene points for you.

I had one of those once. Unfortunately, I now reproduce asexually.
hahahaha

your revolution
08/01/05, 10:31 AM
Technically I didn't because I wrote 'spelt' which isn't even a word at all. So boo and yah!yes but see you meant it as spelled, and you spelled it wrong. haha

punkpixie
08/01/05, 11:31 AM
yes but see you meant it as spelled, and you spelled it wrong. haha
I'm joking dude, I know I 'spelled' it wrong. Although over here we do say 'spelt' a lot.