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eliselovesmusic
01/19/09, 01:11 AM
Are you seeing grey?
Coz I thought we were in the black.
I'm lost for words,
Which is strange for a diplomat.

I write on the lines:
So don't try and read between them.
No I don't dream of you
When I'm stuck deep in R.E.M.

The world revolves so fast
I can hardly keep up.
So is my head spinning from the world
or from seeing you again?
It's safe to say things were better back then.

The curtain flickers, so you don't know I know you're standing there.
I'm feeling blue but I know that you won't care
Coz it matches the colours of your eyes.
My dignity aint much to sacrafice.
I learnt to sink before I could swim,
But that won't help me when the lights go dim.

EatItSucka
01/20/09, 09:07 PM
Am I seeing grey?
I was ceratain you said blue
But colors dont matter,
When im thinking of you

I understand your words
But do you understand mines?
I did not listen when you said
Dont read between the lines

You dont dream of me
That makes me sad
It weakens me
Makes me mad

If Its safe to say things were better back then
Lets be dangerous and start over again
My head is spinning, im watching you
You are my world, these words are true

eliselovesmusic
01/20/09, 11:43 PM
Am I seeing grey?
I was ceratain you said blue
But colors dont matter,
When im thinking of you

I understand your words
But do you understand mines?
I did not listen when you said
Dont read between the lines

You dont dream of me
That makes me sad
It weakens me
Makes me mad

If Its safe to say things were better back then
Lets be dangerous and start over again
My head is spinning, im watching you
You are my world, these words are true


Aww me likes it :-)

eliselovesmusic
02/09/09, 09:47 PM
I don't know if I like this one anymore.... Can anyone offer some "constructive critiscism" on it?