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CT-Tim
08/05/05, 11:04 AM
Hmmm, this is something I wrote a while back. You might like it, you might not, but it's me. Sorry if it's long... it's a 9+ minute song.

Treefall
We planted these trees to save us from days when air runs dry
And I? I pass the time in forests, safe and dark, where birds have lost their will to fly.

And I fall like the astronaut, I can't land.
I'm not coming home to your arms this way.
And I know you're safe below, and I want to see your face,
But I've grown cold with space.

[Chorus]
I remember the day that I fell away,
I remember the hour, your words so sour
You said "I'm colder than winter."
But I, I wanted to be your summer's breeze.

So here we are, we're looking for the falling stars
But don't you know that they're just failing light
Like the sun, they go down each night.
I'm sorry moon, I'm never wishing on you.
No, you're waxing and waning and we're all just fading away.

And you fall like the paralyzed,
You wanna stand but you're afraid to try,
Well maybe this time when I catch you,
You can feel your arms in mine
And remember all the times we traced the lines from cover to cover
To find our true colors, dark and light...
Black and white, oh black and white.

[Chorus again]

I watched the world end, but you survived
You and I survived...
But we refused to fall in love, 'cus that's what children do.
But we grew... to hate the days, when winds swept us away under the waves...

And I won't breathe until you do
'Cus what if you drown? Who will save you?
And I'll be all alone in paradise to burn away the days.
Oh, the days, I'm counting the days.

Well maybe I was born blind,
And I just never learned to speak.
And everything my hands say,
I just lost in translation... in translation.

You're my oasis in Eden,
My shade in dark of night.
You're the last words on my lips
As I give up the fight.

And all the trees have lost their leaves,
I'm waking from a solemn dream.
Opening my tired eyes in time
I think I might realize why I'm still alive.

Well maybe this time when I catch you (echo)
Maybe this time when you catch me (echo)
Well maybe this time when I catch you
I can trade my arms for eyes...
And see hazel (and blue eyes)
Hazel, you're staring back at me.

CT-Tim
08/12/05, 01:27 PM
No insults, appraisals, or questions? I would have guessed there'd be at least one =x Maybe I'll post the audio track soon.

thesht_jfm
08/16/05, 09:20 AM
That's a beautiful song. You are an amazing poet. And, heh, I was actually kind of brought to tears. Its very very deep and one of the most beautiful things I've read in a long time. Kudos for you!

*applause*

-Heather

tomgirl571
08/16/05, 12:28 PM
I agree, Heather. Amazing lyrics! You've got such a way with the words. :wow:

a speedo model
08/17/05, 12:33 PM
amazing!! blew me away!!! you've got talent

Fordzy9
08/18/05, 08:06 AM
unreal, you can feel and relate to the words... keep it up your and amazing writer!

guesswhodied
08/18/05, 02:15 PM
I watched the world end, but you survived
You and I survived...
But we refused to fall in love, 'cus that's what children do.
But we grew... to hate the days, when winds swept us away under the waves... That's my favourite part. I can relate to most of what is said, well done, it's.... so... beautiful...

CT-Tim
08/19/05, 02:24 PM
Thanks for all the kind words.

For those interested, you can download (at least for now) the acoustic version of this song...

here (http://www.chancingtomorrow.com/hosted/Valvalis - Treefall (acoustic).mp3)

In a couple of weeks we should be recording the full band version of the song... hopefully.
Be aware that it's a large download (almost 8MB I think), but it's a long song.

guesswhodied
08/19/05, 04:58 PM
Thanks for all the kind words.

For those interested, you can download (at least for now) the acoustic version of this song...

here (http://www.chancingtomorrow.com/hosted/Valvalis%20-%20Treefall%20%28acoustic%29.mp3)

In a couple of weeks we should be recording the full band version of the song... hopefully.
Be aware that it's a large download (almost 8MB I think), but it's a long song. WOW. You recorded that?! Damn, this is AWESOME. Your song is now on my iPod, good sir. Is there any other place I can listen to more of your music? 'Cause this is amazing.

EDIT: Okay, I checked out your band Valvalis and you guys definitaly rock!

christ
08/19/05, 08:06 PM
Wow, you are really, really talented. I love the song, it's really good. I think you have a great voice, you can sing high notes so well.

Sal
08/23/05, 11:11 PM
beautiful...you have a nice voice too.

i hope you succeed man...

tomgirl571
08/29/05, 02:58 PM
lovely! I've got the song on a cd now, mwahaha! It's beautiful.

CT-Tim
09/03/05, 07:30 PM
I'd just like to thank all of you for your kind words.

Hopefully I'll be able to post some more lyrics in the near future.

<3 Timb

CT-Tim
01/25/06, 11:27 PM
Wow, been a long time since I posted this.

Just thought I'd let you all know... you can hear the "plugged" version of the song now:

http://www.myspace.com/valvalis

GoWaitInTheCar
01/26/06, 06:34 PM
Impressive. Best one I've read all day. Great job.

9/10

GoWaitInTheCar
01/26/06, 06:35 PM
Wow, been a long time since I posted this.

Just thought I'd let you all know... you can hear the "plugged" version of the song now:

http://www.myspace.com/valvalis

If I had more then a 56k modem, I'd listen to that right now. You're an excellent writer.