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Hyp
01/20/09, 03:01 PM
My world is grey
Colorblind to the sun, the moon, and the stars
Oceans and rivers overflow with tar
Throw a dog a bone, believe it won't get far
Force of gravity gives it the weight of a car
Clean shaven unlike Bob Barr's
Forest is a memory, planet sparse
Some may dream of a life on Mars
I
Remember a day when the dolphins squeaked
Just tryna find some food to eat
I
Remember a day when the dogs would bark
But now they've been left behind by the Ark
I
Remember a day when velocity once was
constant
Now unsure like sense common
This Ramen's got no protein
Say fuck the system, and become scene

since writer's block plagues me so, i'll just go ahead and put down another verse from a completely different song =)

Dark colors flood the follicles, fading with the hairline
A rhinestone sways the mind, but this heart'll never be mine
Walls crimson, collapsing, caving,
into that same fissure, I'm asking
You don't think I got a mission?
What's passing me by is what's passing you by
The same shit that allows us to fly
Yet as seconds fly
and decades creep by my eye's vision
I'm wishing for better trust of my given intuition
Slow it down, I never fucked with ya
Try to talk, bitch, and watch the edge slice straight through your jugular
Don't call it murder, dubbed clean-up, a cleanse
Never afraid of a mess, your maid taught me better
Don't judge me by my long nails and Freddy Krueger sweater
It's just a letterman, baby, now feet first through the shredder
I scared the Glock into hiding for this
Now, padlock your earlobes to the flag of the Americans

any feedback at all would be greatly appreciated, thanks :)

EatItSucka
01/20/09, 06:32 PM
"Throw a dog a bone, believe it won't get far
Force of gravity gives it the weight of a car"

Very cool.

My turn:


When you see red I see blue
When you count 1 I count 2
Simple words are Extravagant
Signifigance is dull at best
THIS IS MY LIFE
Your all cowards, cant you see?
THIS IS MY LIFE
Hide behind your mockery
THIS IS MY LIFE
Just cause you dont understand
THIS IS MY LIFE
Doesnt mean your right my friend

Hyp
01/21/09, 03:35 PM
thanks man, yeah i'm lovin the concept on that too because it's so true :)