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EatItSucka
01/21/09, 05:36 PM
Im tired of this boring game
Your strategy is all the same
Same results, every day
Going crazy, every way
You say it like its no big deal
Act like you know how I feel
Im no actor, but I know
When your about to end the show
I swear Im done hanging on
Ill let go and soon be gone
Like a song with no sound
Like its lost to be found
eliselovesmusic
01/22/09, 01:25 AM
Like a whirl pool, you sink me down
But I awake to familiar sounds
Exchanging trauma for sympathy
Using sad stories as currency
I'll leave you now, alone to cry
For a moment or two you'll wonder why
But I can predict tomorrow's headline
"Why I Couldn't Make Him Mine"
So long, fare well, I hit the ground
How you've heard these words before
You'll soon get over the same old sound
Of another slamming door.
hehe I'm quite proud of that :-)
In fact I might use it a song....
(Oh and btw yet another cool poem... Do the words just kinda appear on the page or do you sit and think about something before you write about it?)
EatItSucka
01/22/09, 06:04 AM
This one took about an hour. I just think about my life and write what is going on.
This one was about sketchy people hehe.
Sounds like another love poem. Ill try one :-p
I am listening to Shadows fall (The War Within) right now, so this might sound weird.
The Black mourn awakes
And still I think of you
My cold figure shakes
And still i think of you
I walk alone, hiding behind yesterday
Walk alone, in my own dreams
I see your face, so significant.
But when I awake, its gone...
I weep in my cave
In the dark I lie
I'm already dead
I ask myself why
I feel like writing a song now! I'll let you know for sure.
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