WTF? You Looser

[eliselovesmusic]

But oh well,
I don't know myself well enough (but I'm learning)
"You'd better come over"
sounded pretty fucking promising
to a dissearning ear that is.
We were young and desperate.

You're absent minded
And I'm just absent:
But only when it suits me
Which is when ever you're around

Move on?
It's hard to when he follows me.
What you want aint in this part of town,
It's down that back alley way.

"I like your music"
More like you like my bed.
Walking to you,
Legs like lead.

"Just like old times"
I want new times.
Your just a better class of lie.

[EatItSucka]

But oh well,
I don't know myself well enough (but I'm learning)
"You'd better come over"
sounded pretty fucking promising
to a dissearning ear that is.
We were young and desperate.

You're absent minded
And I'm just absent:
But only when it suits me
Which is when ever you're around

Move on?
It's hard to when he follows me.
What you want aint in this part of town,
It's down that back alley way.

"I like your music"
More like you like my bed.
Walking to you,
Legs like lead.

"Just like old times"
I want new times.
Your just a better class of lie.


This one is a lot different from your others.

I think I can tell what its about, but why don't you tell me.

[eliselovesmusic]

It's basically about this sex-crazed dude who's stalking me lol

Yeah it is quite a bit different a bit more uhm straight-to-the-point haha

[EatItSucka]

It's basically about this sex-crazed dude who's stalking me lol

Yeah it is quite a bit different a bit more uhm straight-to-the-point haha
Dude that sucks. Stalkers are no fun.

[UnderMyDreams]

But oh well,
You're absent minded
And I'm just absent:
But only when it suits me
Which is when ever you're around


This part is good, I think if you changed the "Which is whenever you're around" it might sound a little better.

Pretty solid.

[Judge'sDaughter]

If it's meant to be a song then I think it's quite good, but as a poem it doesn't do it for me.

[eliselovesmusic]

hehehehehehehe