I May Suck, But I'm Not Gay

[Mitch]

Do you want to experience what happens after death?
Well let me tell you it's nothing better than what you feel
And God is scratching at my window trying to lead me out of what I'm about to do
But I've learned to ignore the use and naturality that is the ear
With the point of a finger I shake my head and more tears fall
This is what I've chosen to do and not even you can stop me, so stop right there
I may be something special, but through my eyes the special leave young
And I've spent my time way long overdue

Dear God, I'm sorry and wanted to say thank you,
You put me here to accomplish something but I've gotten far too lost
And now I know the truth of your existence
Which there is none and you're a fraud made up of words to cure peoples fear of death
And now the scratching at the window is stopping and all still and moving life becomes dull
I'm the only one moving while everything is muted and on pause
And for the first time ever I'm in control and on my own in a newly invented world of dreams

[blankster07]

wow, this is the best thing i have ever read in this forum... amazing job

wow, i read it again... and again... this is outstanding... wow... wow...

[Alex Djaferis]

Do you want to experience what happens after death?
Well let me tell you it's nothing better than what you feel
And God is scratching at my window trying to lead me out of what I'm about to do
But I've learned to ignore the use and naturality that is the ear
With the point of a finger I shake my head and more tears fall
This is what I've chosen to do and not even you can stop me, so stop right there
I may be something special, but through my eyes the special leave young
And I've spent my time way long overdue

Dear God, I'm sorry and wanted to say thank you,
You put me here to accomplish something but I've gotten far too lost
And now I know the truth of your existence
Which there is none and you're a fraud made up of words to cure peoples fear of death
And now the scratching at the window is stopping and all still and moving life becomes dull
I'm the only one moving while everything is muted and on pause
And for the first time ever I'm in control and on my own in a newly invented world of dreams

*applause

i went through a revelation like that earlier this year.

[blankster07]

*applause

i went through a revelation like that earlier this year.

dude, i cannot get over how fucking good this is! ... the title isn't that great, though

[ArTkY_]

Really good poem.

Horrible title.

[Mitch]

If you people actually like it, then thanks. Haha yeah, I don't know what's up with the title I made this thread to be. Oh well. I hardly even remember writing this poem, I was in a really bad mood and just decided to write and it seemed to come out better than what I usually try to write.