What are your lyrics?!?!?

[rebeccahd]

if you have any lyrics post them here and rate others,



here is one of mine




Chorus 1
I need you to hold me
I need you to Trust me.
I need you love me.

chorus 2
I need you to hold me
I need you to Trust me.
I need you love me.
For who i am not for who i was.


I sit here late at night.
Just thinking of our fights.
I sit here just thinking how you left me
I trusted you, you let me down.
You put a weight on me.
Now I'm frustrated.
It's been so complicated.
This love thing is just over-rated.
Now I can't hold anymore emotions.
The only emotions that I hold.
Are the one that you left me with.
But I'm sorry for everything i did.
You held me up.
I held you down ,away from everything.
It's like I took all your dreams away from you.


Chorus 1
I need you to hold me
I need you to Trust me.
I need you love me.


ohhh i need you


I need you to hold me
I need you to Trust me.
I need you love me.


for who i am not for who I waaaass

[Hyp]

Needs moar metaphors....alot moar metaphors. Cus right now it just sounds like Soulja Boy is crossing over to R&B.

Oh and wrong forum.

[thespearkid]

Absolute shit. Also, there's an entire forum for this.

[Twizx]

I give it two thumbs up your asshole.

[Jumpoff]

I am a patient boy
I wait, I wait, I wait, I wait
My time is water down a drain

Everybody's moving
Everybody's moving
Everything is moving,
Moving, moving, moving

Please don't leave me to remain
In the waiting room

I don't want the news
(I cannot use it)
I don't want the news
(I won't live by it)

Sitting outside of town
Everybody's always down
(Tell me why)

Because they can't get up
(Ahhh... Come on and get up)
(Come on and get up)

But I won't sit idly by
(Ahhh...)
I'm planning a big surprise
I'm gonna fight
For what I want to be

And I won't make the same mistakes
(Because I know)
Because I know how much time that wastes
(And function)
Function is the key
Inside the waiting room

I don't want the news
(I cannot use it)
I don't want the news
(I won't live by it)

Sitting outside of town
Everybody's always down
(Tell me why)

Because they can't get up
(Ahhh... Come on and get up)
Up from the waiting room

Sitting in the waiting room
(Ahhh...)
Sitting in the waiting room
(Ahhh...)
Sitting in the waiting room
(Ahhh...)
Sitting in the waiting room
(Ahhh...)

(Tell me why)
Because they can't get up

All me.

[tomakebelieve]

I need you.
I need you to stop thinking.
Stop thinking you're so poetic.

[TheOtherAndrew]

its a political punk song


1 2 3 4

<bass starts>
1 2 1234

the government..........
is getting on my nerves!
the punishment..........
of all the inocent....

<pause, then bass drum then snare real fast>

<guitar solo>

<this is the part where the crowd sings along>

Go!
(guitar fill)


DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....

<back to fast verse>

now where did i leave off?
how did i see this
and i didnt realize,
your full of SHIT!



Go!
(guitar fill)


DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....




any comments? i have been making it for about 3 hours and i made the guitar solos and bass parts

[Jumpoff]

its a political punk song


1 2 3 4

<bass starts>
1 2 1234

the government..........
is getting on my nerves!
the punishment..........
of all the inocent....

<pause, then bass drum then snare real fast>

<guitar solo>

<this is the part where the crowd sings along>

Go!
(guitar fill)


DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....

<back to fast verse>

now where did i leave off?
how did i see this
and i didnt realize,
your full of SHIT!



Go!
(guitar fill)


DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....




any comments? i have been making it for about 3 hours and i made the guitar solos and bass parts

ilu

[Chromefox]

These lyrics are superior. (http://absolutepunk.net/showthread.php?t=233489&highlight=wrote)

[thespearkid]

its a political punk song


1 2 3 4

<bass starts>
1 2 1234

the government..........
is getting on my nerves!
the punishment..........
of all the inocent....

<pause, then bass drum then snare real fast>

<guitar solo>

<this is the part where the crowd sings along>

Go!
(guitar fill)


DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....

<back to fast verse>

now where did i leave off?
how did i see this
and i didnt realize,
your full of SHIT!



Go!
(guitar fill)


DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....
DONT!...........DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!....




any comments? i have been making it for about 3 hours and i made the guitar solos and bass parts
Win.

[TheOtherAndrew]

These lyrics are superior. (http://absolutepunk.net/showthread.php?t=233489&highlight=wrote)
Your full of SHIT!

[Duexy]

if you have any lyrics post them here and rate others,



here is one of mine




Chorus 1
I need you to hold me
I need you to Trust me.
I need you love me.

chorus 2
I need you to hold me
I need you to Trust me.
I need you love me.
For who i am not for who i was.


I sit here late at night.
Just thinking of our fights.
I sit here just thinking how you left me
I trusted you, you let me down.
You put a weight on me.
Now I'm frustrated.
It's been so complicated.
This love thing is just over-rated.
Now I can't hold anymore emotions.
The only emotions that I hold.
Are the one that you left me with.
But I'm sorry for everything i did.
You held me up.
I held you down ,away from everything.
It's like I took all your dreams away from you.


Chorus 1
I need you to hold me
I need you to Trust me.
I need you love me.


ohhh i need you


I need you to hold me
I need you to Trust me.
I need you love me.


for who i am not for who I waaaass





your lyrics are dick

[TheOtherAndrew]

I sincerely hope that the OP's username implies she is available in high definition.