I need you

[rebeccahd]

so im new and i didnt see this forum....


Chorus 1
I need you to hold me
I need you to Trust me.
I need you love me.

chorus 2
I need you to hold me
I need you to Trust me.
I need you love me.
For who i am not for who i was.


I sit here late at night.
Just thinking of our fights.
I sit here just thinking how you left me
I trusted you, you let me down.
You put a weight on me.
Now I'm frustrated.
It's been so complicated.
This love thing is just over-rated.
Now I can't hold anymore emotions.
The only emotions that I hold.
Are the one that you left me with.
But I'm sorry for everything i did.
You held me up.
I held you down ,away from everything.
It's like I took all your dreams away from you.


Chorus 1
I need you to hold me
I need you to Trust me.
I need you love me.


ohhh i need you


I need you to hold me
I need you to Trust me.
I need you love me.


for who i am not for who I waaaass


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[leezer]

If you are going to take something like this seriously, try to be more original. This feels like you've just said thing's that you felt without any kind of plan. The fact that is has a song structure isn't really any consolation. Too bland, but you are young and if you keep at it you're material will blossom.