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[alyricman]

I still walk with sorrow
Will my view grow narrow?

I am anxious about doomsday
Is the world heading the wrong way?

I take only my being to heart
While everything else is delusion
Always falling behind from the start
Can't rid this barrier of my mind

(Chorus)
I don't know what I think
I don't know what is in my mind

I don't want to take a scene of my life
How much longer before my mind is in strife?

I don't know where the end of time is
Where is the end of space?
What is simple after ignorance?
Who will follow the human race?

(Chorus)
I don't know what I think
I don't know what is in my mind
Who can see answers in my eye blink?
To help me because then I will not be blind

[thesafeword]

It appears as if you tried too hard to rhyme.