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SCRE4MO
02/02/09, 09:17 AM
'make a SCENE'
Screaming to the day, Singin to the night
So take a shot to ease the pain, Suck it up and fight
Spinnin through your life, Drinkin through the time
Jus think bitch, you coulda been mine
"pull up that bandanna, slip on the brass"
"Hold that head up high, time to kick some ass"
Let it out, scream and throw a fist
Say ya wanna talk? I'll put it on my list
Whats that shit people always say? Be a bitch and walk away?
Fuck that son, i think i'll stay and play
"pull up that bandanna, slip on the brass"
"Hold that head up high, time to kick some ass"
A splash of red, giving color to the dark
Oh shit boy, i think i hit my mark!
So soak your life in gasoline, light a match,run away,
watch it burn,watch it gleam. Burn forever, every day
"pull up that bandanna, slip on the brass"
"Hold that head up high, time to kick some ass"
anamericangod
02/02/09, 09:18 AM
There's no excuse for how bad this is.
lew_1987
02/03/09, 09:54 AM
Poetry in motion right there.
billyboatkid
02/03/09, 09:56 AM
hahaha man the ruthlessness is like icing on the cake.
OdeToTheSun
02/03/09, 10:09 AM
You forgot to mention anything about curbstomping.
FAIL!
SCRE4MO
02/03/09, 10:23 AM
X-) ok, i get it, SHITS WEAK!!! Dammnnnnn
Mike Smith
02/03/09, 11:09 AM
X-) ok, i get it, SHITS WEAK!!! Dammnnnnn
Just have to keep working at it. Like someone once told me on here, try not to post low quality things, or things that werent 100% thought out and put into.
Because if you put on a product like which you did, people will attack you for how bad it is, even if its only one piece you have
So work a bit harder next time to come up with soemthing good, and maybe people will see you as a good songwriter and not some crazy person who just throws shit together for the sake of getting people to see their shit.
SCRE4MO
02/03/09, 12:59 PM
tru that, thanks
Mike Smith
02/03/09, 01:03 PM
tru that, thanks
No problem man
I figured id say it nicer so no one else could say it in a much worse way than me haha
But yeah just take your time on songwriting, and think of a topic thats meaningful to you, rather it be someone in your family just died, or you finding your love in your life.
Just get a good solid topic, and build the foundation off of that.
JimGray
02/03/09, 08:11 PM
Stop posting.
I'm starting to hate this forum
bootsydan
02/04/09, 04:17 AM
I'm starting to hate this forum
Yeah... Its kinda embarrassing to be a regular in here.
lew_1987
02/04/09, 04:28 AM
Yeah... Its kinda embarrassing to be a regular in here.
Bold name!
JimGray
02/04/09, 06:38 AM
Yeah... Its kinda embarrassing to be a regular in here.
Bold name!
Oh Snap!
eliselovesmusic
02/04/09, 09:50 PM
:stars:
Bunnies
02/05/09, 11:03 AM
What is wrong with you guys? That was awesome. Frost would have been proud.
bootsydan
02/05/09, 11:50 PM
Bold name!
Woo! I don't know what that means or how I did it. But it makes me feel kinda special.
lfdfforever
02/06/09, 10:39 AM
keep posting
lew_1987
02/07/09, 03:12 AM
Woo! I don't know what that means or how I did it. But it makes me feel kinda special.
You get it after 1,000 and 2 years being here, or having over 10,000 posts. You just get access to the Members Only forum.
theguy77
02/07/09, 03:14 AM
lew lew lew, your PMs, check them
god why am i awake? lol
lew_1987
02/07/09, 05:11 AM
lew lew lew, your PMs, check them
god why am i awake? lol
Lol, I am thinking the same because I've had very little sleep.
I got the PM, I'll reply with opinions once I've listened to it. Thanks a lot, man.
bootsydan
02/08/09, 12:13 AM
You get it after 1,000 and 2 years being here, or having over 10,000 posts. You just get access to the Members Only forum.
True? Members only hey. Well now I feel even more special.
more heart
02/08/09, 12:18 AM
This is horrible. How old are you?
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