chickmgnt478
02/03/09, 07:39 PM
standing there in the pouring rain
watch it all wash away
i know you still care
stay quiet dont say a word
believe the things you've heard
im not going anywhere
try to tell your self your fine
that its been a waste of time
but this love still seems to stays
your still in this summers air
your lips your eyes your hair
all over me
i hope you see
cause youve been coming undone
from everything youve been through
ive been holding on just hoping that youll get through
everyone knows what we've got
and only we know if well make it or not
tangeled up in these sheets
you perfect next to me
the feeling that i cant forget
believe all the things ive said
cant get you out of my head
and your the only truth i know
so this is a song ive been working on. it doesnt have a bridge but im not sure if i want one yet either. hopefully you guys can let me know. Im more of a pop song writer, so if it rhymes a little to much or whatever, i guess thats my direction, im trying to get people to sing along. but please let me know what you think.
watch it all wash away
i know you still care
stay quiet dont say a word
believe the things you've heard
im not going anywhere
try to tell your self your fine
that its been a waste of time
but this love still seems to stays
your still in this summers air
your lips your eyes your hair
all over me
i hope you see
cause youve been coming undone
from everything youve been through
ive been holding on just hoping that youll get through
everyone knows what we've got
and only we know if well make it or not
tangeled up in these sheets
you perfect next to me
the feeling that i cant forget
believe all the things ive said
cant get you out of my head
and your the only truth i know
so this is a song ive been working on. it doesnt have a bridge but im not sure if i want one yet either. hopefully you guys can let me know. Im more of a pop song writer, so if it rhymes a little to much or whatever, i guess thats my direction, im trying to get people to sing along. but please let me know what you think.