Fallen Hearts

[SeeYouSeptember]

Any feedback is greatly appreciated

We were closer than ever
Together we were the best
Best fucking friends forever
Then I slipped up and fell
Spending time in my room without rest
It all soon became hell

It's not the same day when you're gone
I'd rather stay inside and watch the sun
It's coming down It's coming down

I know that I fucked up
But you didn't have to tell me to shut up
I know what I did wrong
You don't have to repeat it like a popular punk song
I know what I didn't do
I know I should have kissed you..

We used to watch stars
Spending time with each other
Loving the moments spent
Then I said something wrong
You lefted me and tore my heart forever
It all soon became a song

It's not the same day when you're gone
I'd rather stay inside and watch the sun
It's coming down It's coming down

I know that I fucked up
But you didn't have to tell me to shut up
I know what I did wrong
You don't have to repeat it like a popular punk song
I know what I didn't do
I know I should have kissed you..

It's not the same day when you're gone
I'd rather stay inside and watch the sun
It's coming down It's coming down

I know that I fucked up
But you didn't have to tell me to shut up
I know what I did wrong
You don't have to repeat it like a popular punk song
I know what I didn't do
I know I should have kissed you..

[lfdfforever]

for me it was to straight froward

[CTMarshall]

song is simple, but I can tell that you're writing this with at least some amount of emotion. It sounds like it could be a "popular punk song", but there is nothing wrong with that.

[Hyp]

Yeah! Brink back Blink! And not just because of your icon. :P

[SeeYouSeptember]

Yeah! Brink back Blink! And not just because of your icon. :P
Ahaha, I had blink in mind when I wrote this they are my biggest inspiration.

[Kirsty.com]

Wow, I Like your writing style. Your Good(: