A song thats a bit cliche that i wrote haha

[Mike Smith]

Untitled:

Verse 1:

I didnt really know you at all
You were just another friend to me
But then i got to know you better
And i opened my heart to you

Chorus:

I've fallen in love with you
I never want to let you go
I love you more than anything
And i just wanted you to know

Verse 2:

If you ever ask me how or why
I dont think i'd know what to say
There's something bout you thats special
So i think about you every day

Chorus:

I've fallen in love with you
I never want to let you go
I love you more than anything
And i just wanted you to know

(Brigde here)---Little cool drum/guitar riff here

Chorus:

I've fallen in love with you
I never want to let you go
I love you more than anything
And i just wanted you to know

[TK]

More than a bit...

[Mike Smith]

More than a bit...

haha like i said at least i know its cliche

But its a power ballad...Most of them are VERY cliche, including things from bands ranging back from late 80's till now.

So lyric content...What do you guys think of it? No matter how cliche it is, judge the lyric content if possible without being too too harsh on me lol

[MattRM]

Could easily be a Miley Cyrus song, I'm sure.

[Mike Smith]

Could easily be a Miley Cyrus song, I'm sure.

Lol im not entirely sure if i want to take that as an insult or a compliment. Partially an insult because i hate miley cyrus. But partially a compliment because shes pretty good looking and is popular with kids for somer reason.

[TK]

haha like i said at least i know its cliche

But its a power ballad...Most of them are VERY cliche, including things from bands ranging back from late 80's till now.

So lyric content...What do you guys think of it? No matter how cliche it is, judge the lyric content if possible without being too too harsh on me lol

It's pretty terrible in my opinion. But, like someone else said, this could be a Miley Cyrus song and millions of people like those shitty lyrics, so maybe you can find a couple who like these lyrics...

[Mike Smith]

It's pretty terrible in my opinion. But, like someone else said, this could be a Miley Cyrus song and millions of people like those shitty lyrics, so maybe you can find a couple who like these lyrics...

Yeah i understand its not my best song. But oh well, i have 100's i've written haha. One bad one wont hurt me in the longrun i guess :]

[xmy.only.exitx]

Yeah i understand its not my best song. But oh well, i have 100's i've written haha. One bad one wont hurt me in the longrun i guess :]

calling this bad can only be described as a gross understatement.

[lew_1987]

If you know it's bad... get rid of it or change it.

[CTMarshall]

atleast it's sweet?

[Hyp]

Turn it into a country song and add some moon and star references in there. You will make millions.

[Mike Smith]

atleast it's sweet?

Thats mostly what i was going for....i was making it so the girl would like the song...i wasnt going for 100% amazing lyrical content

Turn it into a country song and add some moon and star references in there. You will make millions.

LMAO! I dont really like country music but i bet that honestly would work :P