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b e L I E v e
09/13/05, 02:38 PM
Yeah, so im gonna go for it...let me first say that i like writing the simple things...and rhyming, so if you dont like words that rhyme, dont read any further...

Yesterdays Tomorrow



I decided to write a poem today

For a girl I have come to know

I’m determined to give her this poem today

Yet I wrote it so long ago



I decided to fall in love today

As simple as it seems

I’ve thought of her all day today

And met her in my dreams



There is only one regret today

With this dream girl of mine

She decided to fall in love today

Leaving my heart to fall behind



So I sit here alone today

My love is now in the past

Tears burn my face today

This love will always last
blankster07
09/13/05, 03:36 PM
i hate being mean, but are you really being serious?
Alex Djaferis
09/14/05, 12:38 AM
as far as conventional poems go. its great :) something you could read to children. haha.
IAmCountryMusic
09/14/05, 03:57 AM
seems like a little kid wrote it.

if you were to add a line like 'cut my wrist, black my eyes' it could be a screamo song
allelish
09/14/05, 10:00 AM
My friend with down syndrome could write that in 33 seconds.
OveriseFan
09/14/05, 10:53 AM
Um...

you're kidding?
b e L I E v e
09/14/05, 12:19 PM
i quit
allelish
09/14/05, 01:28 PM
It is for the best, my friend.
b e L I E v e
09/14/05, 01:51 PM
It is for the best, my friend.
yeah i know...but at least i tried...well not really tried...ah fuck this, i hate poetry anyway
allelish
09/14/05, 01:52 PM
yeah i know...but at least i tried...well not really tried...ah fuck this, i hate poetry anywayyE!!1 pOetRY iS 4 gAYzZzZ.
punkpixie
09/14/05, 02:02 PM
yE!!1 pOetRY iS 4 gAYzZzZ.
Which is why I write it so often.
SLADE775
09/14/05, 02:43 PM
I've got a poem for you.



you're poem is shallow
now I bet you're red in the face
it's almost as bad
as troys mixtape
apoemtothedead
09/14/05, 04:22 PM
I've got a poem for you.



you're poem is shallow
now I bet you're red in the face
it's almost as bad
as troys mixtape


go back to the news forum ***.
b e L I E v e
09/14/05, 04:39 PM
go back to the news forum ***.
:thumbsup:
OveriseFan
09/14/05, 04:46 PM
go back to the news forum ***.Slade's amazing.

He may be gay, but that doesn't change the fact he fucks better than you.

Jealousy, Jealousy, Jealousy.

Shame on you.
Throwback
09/14/05, 05:56 PM
This poem and Slade both equally suck.
SLADE775
09/15/05, 07:34 AM
go back to the news forum ***.

okay royal keeper of the general forums. Whatever you say.

This poem and Slade both equally suck.

another poem, for you

roses are red
violets are blue
yes I suck your mothers titties
and she enjoys it too.
Scott Weber
09/15/05, 02:22 PM
wow.
SLADE775
09/15/05, 03:20 PM
wow.

http://photos1.blogger.com/img/106/1266/640/Douche.jpg
rocker_05
09/27/05, 11:13 AM
sounds like something a 10-year-old would write. (being honest!!!)