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Kirsty.com
02/15/09, 01:05 PM
Let me take you far away, where no one can see
Let me break the promise that you swore there would always be.
Let me be myself for once,and create my soul once more
Let me suprise you one last time and knock upon your door.

Keep me in your heart forever, And throw away the key,
make me see that being with you, is the only place i wanna be.
Take me to the kingdom where 'I love you' means it all.
Throw me into this forever and catch me when I fall.

Love me when its dark, right through unitll its light,
Have me in this life and make my world seem bright.
Catch me by the moonlight, and fly among the stars,
Promise me that me and you, we'll never be apart.

Sing to me when i get lonely and make me feel complete
Show me that this feeling is the one and only heat.
Talk me through the bad times and cheer my mood back round
Break me into a million pieces and mend what you have found.

SeeYouSeptember
02/15/09, 02:03 PM
You come up with really good phrases.

Kirsty.com
02/15/09, 02:06 PM
Thank you(: So do you.

Calvin's Shadow
02/15/09, 03:28 PM
These get better and better keep it up (:

Kirsty.com
02/17/09, 12:22 PM
Thank you(: Your Stufff Is WAYY better than mine thouu

schreixfurxdich
02/17/09, 01:40 PM
i like this one. it's really good!

Kirsty.com
02/17/09, 01:48 PM
Thankss, means alot:) Any other feedback of anyonee?

thespearkid
02/17/09, 03:09 PM
There is not a single line in this poem that hasn't been written before. Very unoriginal, extremely cliche.

Kirsty.com
02/17/09, 03:40 PM
Thanks, But i thought it was quite original, bet hey ho, each to there own,

thespearkid
02/17/09, 08:38 PM
What about it is original?

Kirsty.com
02/18/09, 03:27 AM
Im not here to argue with you, I'm just saying, i thought it was good. Original meaning I wrote it. It came from my head. No one elses.

thespearkid
02/18/09, 08:00 AM
That's not what original means.

Kirsty.com
02/18/09, 09:06 AM
Again, I Do not care.