If You'd Just Shut Up, I'd Almost Believe You Were Her

[rckstr29]

{Chorus}
I wanna love you with my eyes closed
So I can see her
If you could be her
I'd love you every night, Oh!

You wear the kind of shades
That cover half your face
But baby that's ok
Because in this light
And my bleary sight
you look like her tonight

{Chorus}

I swear I love you so
And I won't let you go
I swear I love your friends
But I just make pretend
Like you are someone else
Oh God, I need some help
But you look good tonight
Let's love instead of fight
I'll be the best you've had
If you just wear this bag
And when I'm deep inside
You'll never know I lied
When I said I love you so

{Chorus}

[rckstr29]

So, this isn't about me if anyone is offended. I just thought it was mean and funny.

[gilfers]

without being wierd; I think the idea for this song is really quite cool but the way it's written doesn't really pull it off. If that makes sence?
I mean I like it & it is goood, don't get me wrong but I don't know it lacks something.
without being mean or horrible (: