Don't Worry

[singyoutocoma]

The voices in his head,
They see the world in third-person limited.
He’s traded rationality for
A knockout punch to the face instead…
God, I hate this weather; can’t think tonight…
And I’ve got nothing to say.
So I’m falling out of love with my own skin,
The way the quickest candle always fades away…

And I tried to make this better,
But I can’t live like this forever.
So if these words feel wrong again,
Then cut me off this time...

And don’t worry about the way I’m fighting these mistakes,
‘Cause I created this, I created this…
I’m done turning around, trying to hold onto those days.
I’m not chasing you for anything.
You’d love to think that you still care about me,
But I'll fade to black with the world outside.
So don’t worry about all of the things I tried to say.
I know you too well to break this time.

Searching for resolution
25 months away…
Tuesday morning, on my knees
‘Cause I found God, hey…
And I’m still madly in love with your smile,
And I’m still a little full of myself.
But I’m falling out of love with the way you
Take me prisoner inside of my own head…

And I tried to make this better,
But I can’t live like this forever.
So if these words feel wrong again,
Then cut me off this time...

And don’t worry about the way I’m fighting these mistakes,
‘Cause I created this, I created this…
I’m done turning around, trying to hold onto those days.
I’m not chasing you for anything.
You’d love to think that you still care about me,
But I'll fade to black with the world outside.
So don’t worry about all of the things I tried to say.
I know you too well to break this time.

I know you hate apologies, but I’m going to find a way
To show I’m sorry for the times I talked myself down every day.
I took my hour upon the stage, and full and furious was my song,
But I’ve found this walking shadow always fades away and turns out wrong.
So I’ll pretend we’re lovers, and you’ll still pretend we’re friends.
But we didn’t try enough for either in our storybook descent.
And I know at least tomorrow I’ll wake up with no regrets,
But I’ve found this walking shadow creeps on day-to-day and means nothing in the end.

So don’t worry about the way I’m fighting these mistakes,
‘Cause I saw them coming long ago.
I’m done turning you into the god I always
Prayed would take me away from all I know.
You’d love to think that you still care about me,
But I can’t hurt like this anymore.

So don’t worry about the way I’m fighting these mistakes,
‘Cause I created this, I created this…
I’m done turning around, trying to hold onto those days.
I’m not chasing you for anything.
And I tried to make this better,
But I can’t live like this forever.
So don’t worry about all of the things I tried to say.
I know you too well to break this time.

[singyoutocoma]

Any feedback would be appreciated. Any thoughts on the following would help:

Whether the Macbeth references drag it down/hurt the flow.
Whether the "Lithium" line comes off as a tribute or outright theft.
Any awkward lines/phrasing.
Whether the bridge ("I know you hate apologies...") fits well.

[gilfers]

thats really goood! (:
I like the apologies line but the line after has one to many syllabuls - if that's how you spell it :S
but I think it's really good (: