point of view

[Addictx]

Trapped within my point of view
I sailed across the sea
And looked back from the other shore
Surprised that it was me

How liberating! then I thought,
And walked my welcome way
Determined not again my new-found
Freedom betray.

And yet, alas! it was itself
A self-framed point of view
In which i dwelt content to know
The place of what i knew

[Kirsty.com]

Urgh.

[CTMarshall]

Urgh.

wow. what a response...haha.

[TK]

Wasn't completely terrible, really cheesy though. It showed a little potential I thought though.

[Kirsty.com]

Yeah, Thats how it made me feel. Not very good piece if you asked me.