the untimely end...

[ThisIsJo]

A bit of an emotional one this time. Warning..I am not a writer.

the untimely end
you kill me with your tears
your wild eyes filled with fear
you don’t linger like you used to
you don’t say the thing that speak to me
drifting you are from me
lost within your make believe
betraying my heart and all that used to be
please tell me, say anything
let me believe the lies again
fill my heart with hope
so empty, so disgusting
everything ripped from me
torn open and stabbed over and over again
you don’t think I see
the truth in your reality
I am a play to you a little game,
you go on and on about how amazing,
how beautiful I am without and within
how life begins when you see me smile
how I am everything in your eyes
then how is it
that you don’t care
how is it
that you are not here
how is it that you continue to speak
of 16 year old girls who worship at your feet
and now you're gone, I know were you’ve been
to her, again.
Warnings of don’t get hurt, feel past my ears
kept trying to ignore what it is I feel
but at the end of the day, it isn’t real
I’m just a girl, you just a boy
known for six years
and it is all now destroyed
destroyed by stupid games
and stupid love
completed by the stupid lies.

[Scott Irvine]

:nosmilie:No

[ThisIsJo]

glad you liked it so much. feel free to give me criticism other than no though.
but thanks for the comment. once again, not a writer which I'm sure is obvious.

[de la sympathie]

no, no you are a writer, i loved your other stuff, just.... eh... this one was really cliche/angsty. sorry.

[ThisIsJo]

thank you. And it is okay not to like it.
i guess i just have bad days/off days.