another something about getting famous for some reason or another

[beau blood rush]

somehow the floorboards know when to creak
when i am thinking back on you
with wet eyes
between the flags
i'ts the dry jokes that pull me through

everybody else comes off feeling like a winner
my butterfly kisses
flutter on a rusty hinge
tell me anything to keep me listening
and drop whatever's to hook me in

we are sniffing head-lines off the back of news stands
for the kick or the disaster
whichever keeps us on the field

they say we're auctioneers and you're bidding on love
going once, going twice
and souled
have I ever told you, you give me wings?
saint, Kentucky
or something in between

all their stories got me in stitches
I just need to work out which
(or whichever comes first)
waiting on airports for an excuse to blur

we are sniffing head-lines off the back of news stands
for the kick or the disaster
whichever keeps us on the field

[beau blood rush]

surely worthy of something
even if it's hate

[Mike Smith]

Nice try, but too cliche

[beau blood rush]

you actually can't just throw "cliche" around whenever you like just because everyone else does.
i would say a cliche line is "I love you baby gimme some of that"
not "butterfly kisses flutter on a rusty hinge"
and if your talking about the subject matter then i would say writing a song about the state of pop culture is less cliche than a love song.

you're funny though

[Mike Smith]

you actually can't just throw "cliche" around whenever you like just because everyone else does.
i would say a cliche line is "I love you baby gimme some of that"
not "butterfly kisses flutter on a rusty hinge"
and if your talking about the subject matter then i would say writing a song about the state of pop culture is less cliche than a love song.

you're funny though

Lol i wasnt trying to make you mad

I was actually joking because that's what everyone else on here seems to say about everyones work but their own

I actually like this piece of writing and its pretty solid as a song or poem or whatever you were aiming for

Good job =]

[Leerycist]

somehow the floorboards know when to creak

my butterfly kisses
flutter on a rusty hinge

they say we're auctioneers and you're bidding on love
going once, going twice
and souled


I think the above lines are very fresh, I enjoyed this piece.

[beau blood rush]

Lol i wasnt trying to make you mad

I was actually joking because that's what everyone else on here seems to say about everyones work but their own

I actually like this piece of writing and its pretty solid as a song or poem or whatever you were aiming for

Good job =]


haha that's what i love about our culture - sarcasm and the internet use are getting greater every year
but they don't work well together at all

thanks man - I usually don't get worked up when people don't bass their opinions - i guess i finally broke

I'm glad i broke on someone who was just joking :]


and thanks for saying some of the lines are fresh man - i've posted another one that i'm pretty sure you'll like

[Mike Smith]

haha that's what i love about our culture - sarcasm and the internet use are getting greater every year
but they don't work well together at all

thanks man - I usually don't get worked up when people don't bass their opinions - i guess i finally broke

I'm glad i broke on someone who was just joking :]


and thanks for saying some of the lines are fresh man - i've posted another one that i'm pretty sure you'll like

Lol sorry i shouldnt be sarcastic as obviously it isnt exactly easy to tell on here whos joking or not :P. I mean i loved the song or poem whichever it is considered! the lines were definitely pretty fresh and the structure is pretty well put together.

And ill go check out the other song you posted...It's Z-Sides right?

[DJ_Tanner]

"we are sniffing head-lines off the back of news stands"

love that.

[beau blood rush]

haha yeh ther lyrics for songs
me and my band are just recording our EP atm - but straight after we want to write a couple of new songs to replace the old ones so we can have a 8 song set with none of our old songs in it
yr quite the ledge mike smith - hardly anyone gets me on here
and thank you tons dj tanner

[Mike Smith]

haha yeh ther lyrics for songs
me and my band are just recording our EP atm - but straight after we want to write a couple of new songs to replace the old ones so we can have a 8 song set with none of our old songs in it
yr quite the ledge mike smith - hardly anyone gets me on here
and thank you tons dj tanner

Lol nice man...My band will hopefully have an EP soon. Whats the name of your band? Do you have a myspace? I want to check it out! haha

And im quite the ledge? Thats a good thing right? :P

And yeah man we only have a 5 song set list right now and its only 2 original and 3 covers because we only have 2 solid originals done.

[beau blood rush]

yeah its a good thing ;]
yeh go to www.myspace.com/forourhero

and give us a month to finish up our EP and have a listen :]