Damned (explicit)

[bangoballa]

Hey guys I'm completely new to this site. I never ever shared any of my song lyrics with anyone, I just want feedback, constructive criticism, anything goes. Hope you guys like the first song I've ever written

Damned

Another lonely Friday night
the feelings inside me don't feel alright
you’re all i thought about
you’re all i cared for.
But now it's just too late
you say he is the one
he makes everything right
staring into your angel eyes
plagued my fucking life
it makes me realize to see

I am damned
damned, from the very first night i met you
damned, from our very last dance i saw you
damned, from that one last time you said i love you
said i love you


glancing at all your pictures
burns my eyes worse than fire
these memories of you
haunts me all day, stabs me all night
only waking up without you, without you.
laying around in all this misery
this needle gives me the strength i need
to make this pain go away.


I am damned
damned, from the very first night i met you
damned, from our very last dance i saw you
damned, from that one last time you said i love you
said i love you

So cute
So pretty
So fucking bitter sweet (x2)

laying all alone
radio on listening to all our favorite songs
i wont let the thought of you demise
this bottle i convey
gets me through this darkest day
then i start to realize you are all i had
but we were never etched in stone.

I am damned
damned, from the very first night i met you
damned, from our very last dance i saw you
damned, from that one last time you said i love you
said i love you

[Leerycist]

this might sound a lot better in the song, but it didn't seem too fresh.

these three parts...

staring into your angel eyes

glancing at all your pictures
burns my eyes worse than fire

radio on listening to all our favorite songs

...i feel like i've heard dozens of times before. maybe the music could make it a legit song though.