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SeeYouSeptember
02/19/09, 04:45 PM
Comments suggestions, I'm pretty sure this isn't cliche at all.

You gave me the same look you gave me twenty years ago
The look oh, that look, sends me straight to a place where I go, when I'm down
I'll see you after I get out, when I recover into a straighter self, until then I'm out

We're all just heavy tight rope walkers on a high wire
We're all just heavy tight rope walkers on a high wire
We're gonna fall, but we have something to catch us...

She said, "Oh I don't know you anymore, you're not you"
"Don't go back, don't go, to the way when I was gone, I'm begging you
I'll see you after I get out, when I recover into a straighter self, until then I'm out

We're all just heavy tight rope walkers on a high wire
We're all just heavy tight rope walkers on a high wire
We're gonna fall, but we have something to catch us...

The father we go, the higher we get
The father we go, the higher we get
But you can't be high all the time
You can't be high all the time...

We're all just heavy tight rope walkers on a high wire
We're all just heavy tight rope walkers on a high wire
We're gonna fall, but we have something to catch us
We're gonna fall...

ZackHolbrook
02/19/09, 04:47 PM
i have to say you are a very talented young man

Mike Smith
02/19/09, 05:04 PM
Good job dude :]

SeeYouSeptember
02/20/09, 12:54 PM
Any more comments?

SeeYouSeptember
02/21/09, 09:18 AM
C'mon!

gilfers
02/21/09, 09:35 AM
that's really good.
I think it's a bit repetitive but that's probs just 'cos I'm reading it rather then hearing it (:
goood job anyways :D

SeeYouSeptember
02/21/09, 01:45 PM
Bump?