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ArTkY_
09/29/05, 08:01 PM
I wrote this when I was terribly bored in math class. I don't really know what the fuck it's about, well actually I do. It's about refusing to see truths that are right in front of your face. It's decent at best, be as critical as you wish.

A mark in time
A step in place
A pillar broken
A lost race
A broken line does define
what is now yours and once was mine

Can't you see through your fingers when you cup your hands over your eyes?
Can't you see us through the cloth when you tie the blindfold to hide your sight?

This sketch of a line,
one day you'll see through your blinds
X-Ray vision seems possible these days
though the risk of radiation will leave you permanently blind

But wouldn't you want to see through your fingers when you cup your hands over your eyes?
But wouldn't you want to see us through the cloth when you tie the blindfold to hide your sight?

Fin.

cris545
09/29/05, 09:03 PM
pretty good way of investing time during math class
not bad at all :thumbsup:

remember me? :)

ArTkY_
09/30/05, 05:29 AM
YES, it's been a long time. where you been?

cris545
09/30/05, 03:49 PM
working on stuff, studying, and trying to survive senior year, im exhausted

de la sympathie
09/30/05, 04:01 PM
good job tariq, haven't seen you post in here in a while

ArTkY_
10/01/05, 02:20 PM
Senior year of what?

Thanks dude.

rocker_05
10/02/05, 02:28 PM
nice poem

ArTkY_
10/04/05, 06:40 PM
ty. more people need to read this.

cris545
10/05/05, 02:16 PM
Senior year of what?

Thanks dude.
high school

ArTkY_
10/05/05, 03:51 PM
high school
k. I'm a junior right now, hard as hell.

cris545
10/07/05, 02:14 PM
k. I'm a junior right now, hard as hell. i can relate... im sick of school

ArTkY_
10/07/05, 02:41 PM
i can relate... im sick of school
I have 2 projects for this weekend.

cris545
10/08/05, 12:58 PM
I have 2 projects for this weekend. damn good luck

ArTkY_
10/08/05, 01:01 PM
damn good luck
It is complete bs.