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stealthpeng
02/20/09, 09:35 PM
(one of my favorite poems I've written.)

watch the sunburn peel and flake
dead skin like a corpse of fatal mistake
fresh red leather is seen underneath
sun reflect's brighter off smoke-free teeth
perfect and perfectly raw you grin
damaged enough to hide no more sin
except for that smile all clean and bright
like a hen in a fox's stomach, realized in hindsight
that foxes and boys will err in their ways
but will hide behind 32 pearly white lies all their days

stealthpeng
12/12/09, 08:28 PM
one of my favorites.

ElephantGun
12/12/09, 09:29 PM
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speechless.
I absolutely love this.


It has so much character.