hey man you look like you've seen a ghost or something.

[eight]

the chior sang across the street. the hoods of thier cloaks were sent atop thier heads with the hope that the thick gray would reflect and resist the rain. there was no sort of composer leading them. they knew exactly how to sing what they needed to sing. every waver of the notes was engraved onto every facet of their entity, of their instinct and of their souls. this was a unique chior. from an outsiders perspective they could be mistaken easily for a cult. but certainly, such was not the case. their words promoted no sort of hope in a strange savior that would take them away onto some utopian planet, but instead the hope that this world would one day cease. and with the end of the world comes the end of every good in the world, as well as the end of every evil. they sang. with passion and sincerity.

"death is a marvelous end.
and your sorrows i will lend
to the mouth of this furnace,
you shall never be weary
or feel lonely
not ever again."

[Boring Pop Song]

i'm not gonna lie, that's pretty awesome

[rocker_05]

i'm not gonna lie, that's pretty awesome
yeah....ur right

[punkpixie]

Fuck me that was beautiful. I love you because you know what's going on, unlike half the fuckhouses that post in this forum.

[DirtyWetHamster]

)))((((((
(•)...(•)
....U....
..[___]..- - -{awesome}

[xforestxwaitsx]

not bad..really. the topic is interesting to the reader which is always good.

[ArTkY_]

Kick ass.

[Blared]

I don't come in here much but that was really good.

[alackof]

i like it.

[ThisIsJo]

i really liked it, not much else i can say. great job.

[de la sympathie]

i loved it. you write so damn beautifully.

[borntokill]

i loved it. you write so damn beautifully.:ditto: (http://www.absolutepunk.net/misc.php?do=getsmilies&wysiwyg=1&forumid=0#)

[eight]

hey, i just want to say, thanks to everyone. and if you don't mind, add my band on myspace. thanks. we're kinda like metalcore, so i'm not sure if its your style, but just add us anyway. if you feel like it. it means a lot. thanks again. www.myspace.com/marchthewounded