My Questions

[rocker_05]

I'm not commenting this. If you hate it, please don't say anything. If you like it, tell me. If there's somethings I could change, TELL ME, DAMN IT!

Does it soak you to the bone?

Will it leave you alone?

Can it take your fate?

And turn you around?


**Can you scream if fires come?
When they said you must stay?

Can you stop tomorrow? **


Could you add these questions?
To your collection, please?

Can you make time stop forever...?

Just for you and me?


**Can you scream if fires come?
When they said you must stay?

Can you stop tomorrow? **



You've got your emo poems...

Can you break them now?

Can you save the day?

Problem after problem?


Can you handle all I have to ask?
Can you take a question?

And make its heart beat?

Could you keep life from falling to pieces?


Can you handle this song?

I hope you can, my dear goodbye.

[lovely864md]

Can you save the day?


Question: is this a clever Saves the Day reference or just a coincidence?

[rocker_05]

Question: is this a clever Saves the Day reference or just a coincidence?
coincidence, never heard of them

[OveriseFan]

coincidence, never heard of them
You've

Never

Heard

Of

Saves

The

Day

I refuse to call your poem shitty now. You are a disgrace to this community. Saves the Day are one of the greatest bands of our time.

Edit : I gave you a chance, but after reading your profile... :shake:

[para ser libre]

dont Post Somethign Adn Say Dont Say You Dont Like It, We Aren"t Hear To Praise You, We Are Here As Peer Writers Adn Peer Critics Suck It Up